Manticore's Feedback Thread

[Manticore]

Hello everyone!

This is the place to drop any feedback you might have about my characters or RP.

For your reference, I've included links to important pages regarding my characters here on the forums. The stories are ordered in approximate chronological order.

James Lambert

Wiki Page (Outdated)

James Lambert is a retired Vice Admiral and Commodore of the Liberty Navy, First Fleet. He was one of the most decorated officers to ever serve in the First Fleet, notably holding the Medal of Honor for the Hudson Crisis, and during his time of service was equally as famous for his heroic deeds as he was for his bouts of erratic behavior. (The phrase "pulling a Lambert" is still used in the service to reference an officer disappearing unexpectedly due to health or personal-related reasons.) He retired unexpectedly in 825 AS and has disappeared from public life ever since.

Missing Man Formation (Complete)
Post-Traumatic (Complete)
At Any Cost (Complete)
Psychotherapy (Complete)
From Darkness (Abandoned)
An Exile Interrupted (Complete)

This Will Destroy You (In Progress)

Lisa Jaeger

Wiki Page (Outdated)

Lisa Jaeger is known in the quiet and dark circles of Sirius as one of, if not the, most capable unaffiliated hackers/computer specialists operating. Beyond that reputation, little is known about her.

A Slave's Game (Complete)
From Darkness (Abandoned)
The Quiet Years (Complete)

Banshee

Banshee is a feared and unpredictable operator loosely associated with the Lane Hackers and/or Outcasts (depending on who you ask). She has not been sighted in over a decade.

In Somnis Veritas (Complete)
Missing Man Formation (Complete)

The Wayfarer

The Wayfarer is an aged Hathor-class gunboat that has been operating as a freelancer for decades, captained/owned by Rob Shaw. Former crew members include Tanya Carmen, Sparrow Terrell, Gage Joiner, Floretta Kingsley, Kouta Miyamoto, and Lex Krause. Former associates/guests include James Lambert, Lisa Jaeger, and James Arland.

Wayfarer: History and Crew

An Exile Interrupted (Complete)
The Quiet Years (Complete)

RETIRED CHARACTERS

Retired Luc Saint-Just Wiki Page From Darkness (Abandoned) Andrew Moray Wiki Page A Slave's Game (Complete) Isabella Ibarra Sir Avery Stirling

Any and all feedback is most welcome!

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[Manticore]

The above post has been updated to reflect new/completed RPs.

Any feedback you can give on my RP either in-game or on the forums would be appreciated!

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[Sarawr!?]

I want my Rogueboat to meet the Wayfarer again sometime :3

Also, I really enjoy pretty much every interaction I've had with James, especially Apples to Apples, despite the fact that it was killing Rachel inside. XD

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[LN] Recruitment | Rachel Baker Bio

[Manticore]

Thanks Sarah! I need to get the Wayfarer into Liberty more often.

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The first post has been updated with my newest character, Miss Lisa Jaeger of the BAF. Anyone who's encountered her, please let me know what you think of her development thus far.

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[Jane Hartman]

You've already heard my opinion on your RP(s) over Skype, but I'll say it again here. Fantastic work. I've not seen too many people, on Discovery or otherwise, that can make a character seem quite as genuine as yours do. From Darkness could have been something I picked up a bestseller's list.

In short, keep it up!

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[Rodent]

Two things.

Update your character list, and put in those crusader kings II traits for them so that nobody else except me and Joe get it.

Of course, you're a fantastic writer and dedicated to the roleplay cause. Keep it up man.

[Manticore]

You've already heard my opinion on your RP(s) over Skype, but I'll say it again here. Fantastic work. I've not seen too many people, on Discovery or otherwise, that can make a character seem quite as genuine as yours do. From Darkness could have been something I picked up a bestseller's list.

In short, keep it up!

Thank you so very much. I happen to think you're by far one of the top writers around here yourself, so it means a whole lot to hear that from you. I'd love to get Jane involved in the story my latest stuff somehow, let me know if you have any ideas.

Two things.

Update your character list, and put in those crusader kings II traits for them so that nobody else except me and Joe get it.

Of course, you're a fantastic writer and dedicated to the roleplay cause. Keep it up man.

Thanks man. I'll stick the CK2 traits in somewhere. Maybe my user page would be a good spot.

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[l3wt]

While I can't hope to match the feedback you left me in sheer... grandiosity, I can at the very least say that I've found all of your characters to be very interesting, and your writing on-point and enjoyable. You take initiatives that are both sensible and entertaining, and that's always great fun in an RP community. Great to have you on board.

[Manticore]

Hello there, I have returned from the depths of space and time to bring you more depressing-but-hopefully-decent fiction!

The original post has been updated with some new content. Sadly the old wiki seems to be read-only and the new wiki doesn't do character pages so I will need to figure out another way to provide updated character bios. For now there are some short blurbs for the active or soon-to-be active characters reflecting their current status in 836 AS.

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