Crystal Wind: Comments

[Saigo.Watanabe]

Story
Constructive Criticism and praise only.

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"Time is too precious to be idle." - Saigo Watanabe
"Death is something that is inevitable, Something you cannot run away from." - Katharina Hildegard
Now going under the gaming name: Seraxia
www.twitter.com/Seraxia

[Orin]

Not bad. Some minor grammar issues, but nothing that bad.

Not sure what you meant by GMG and BHG conflicts, though. Last time I checked they weren't enemies.:unsure:

[Saigo.Watanabe]

yeh, i kindda ment the conflicts with the outcasts, but pm me with the grammar issues and ill fix them:)

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"Time is too precious to be idle." - Saigo Watanabe
"Death is something that is inevitable, Something you cannot run away from." - Katharina Hildegard
Now going under the gaming name: Seraxia
www.twitter.com/Seraxia

[Ash]

Its really good, an aspect never really covered before.

This is a good way of publicising stories really, i need someone to evaluate my KNF story anyway. Anyone up to the task?

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[Orin]

...an aspect never really covered before...

Well, I wouldn't say that. We've got quite a few jelly people, but everything has been done, really.

I'm looking foward to seeing more of her, something that sets her apart from other infests.

[Ash]

Nah i meant as in a good side of the Nomads.

Or is that what you mean anyway?

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[Orin]

Heh... <pokes La Viuda Roja prologue> Good side of Nomads...

No, I meant I have seen a lot of infested stories. But no, there haven't been a whole lot of good portrayed in the Nomads.

[Ash]

I read it, its alright, based on quotes.

I dont suppose your planning a sequal?

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[Saigo.Watanabe]

This is mearly the start... expect more to come

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"Time is too precious to be idle." - Saigo Watanabe
"Death is something that is inevitable, Something you cannot run away from." - Katharina Hildegard
Now going under the gaming name: Seraxia
www.twitter.com/Seraxia

[Orin]

Aye, the prologue is just talking. An interesting writing form I never tried before. There are two chapters afterwards...

If you want to comment on that though, there's a feedback topic for it. Keep to Saigo's story here, don't want any hijacking.

I'm looking foward to it, Saigo.