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Mike_Fire · 10-27-2008, 12:17 AM,

Hello.

If you want you can check my stories and data. All my link's work are on my signature.

Strontium Dog - Rookie Mike Fire - Bounty Hunter Card 
 The Freelancer Captain Jeff Willdor's Log, Luxury Liner "Exodus" 
Liberty Navy - Lieutenant Rick Gunner
Cyborg-Durango.Flore - Story - Data & communication channel
 The Freelancer Vick Blaster's Log - Hunts Nomad/Wilds - He will join forces with The Order 
Help us to grow up by clicking on us =>

<= don't forget our parents family too.
Click here to see the dragon family

10-27-2008, 12:50 AM,

' Wrote:Read all yours Niezck, so you don't count:P(no, seriously, I've read them all O_O STOP PESTERING ME ON SKYPE!)

ZAPPEH LOVES MEH!:D

Zapp · 10-27-2008, 01:24 AM,

Feedback!

Note: I'm gonna be blunt here, so if you don't like it, tough :\ if you don't want public feedback in the future, then say so.

Zelot - the plot is overall good, but the grammar and detail are a bit lacking. I feel the scene where the mysterious guy gave him the LSF file could've been played up a bit more, but overall I liked it.

Duke nuke'm - was interesting to see the progression from RM to RHA to Molly, though the bit where it became Molly was a bit confusing, and I think the timeframe (talking about things in years regarding a truce) was a bit skewed... the whole rescuing the families was a tad abrupt, maybe space out the conversations (it was hard to tell who was talking).

Rouge - Err... lolwut? I was a tad... confused. Couldn't really follow it all that great, and I have no idea who the characters were cuz you didn't really take the time to say who they were in any detail, and moved on before I even knew who was who. I was like "Jonathan? Who's that?". Put a bit of cohesion in, and separate it into posts instead of having paragraphs that leap in the same post, and it would help.

Dopamino · 10-27-2008, 01:31 AM,

The Story of Johnny Blade:
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...c=12809&hl=

Only the first segment is done. The rest is all still in my head.

I mostly lurk around Media Center these days.

MB52 · 10-27-2008, 01:36 AM,

If you are bored you can check out my LN story (click the dreadnought in the siggy)

=)

Iâll carry this flag
To the grave if I must
Because itâs flag that I love
And a flag that I trust

Zapp · 10-27-2008, 01:36 AM,

Dopamino - short and sweet sentences that get the point across without an excess of words, omitting details that are obviously rather irrelevant. I like.

Lohingren · 10-27-2008, 01:50 AM,

heres 1 of me stories

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=23813

heres me journal

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=21925

tear on my friends

Reapers of Sirius Database

BaconSoda · 10-27-2008, 01:57 AM,

Here it is:

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=24364

I think you should read this before everyone else's, mainly because you know I didn't put a food item and a drink item together to make a name, and that makes me awesome.

[8:32:45 PM] Dusty Lens: Oh no, let me get that. Hello? Oh it's my grandma. She says to be roleplay.
[12:49:19 AM] Elgatodiablo: You know its nice that you have all that proof and all, Bacon... but I just don't believe you.

farmerman · 10-27-2008, 02:06 AM,

You could read my Gaian's story of how he came to be such, or atleast the part I actually wrote. I have lots of ideas for this one, but it never comes out right. Especially with his particular method of comparisons and such.

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=21788

Faction info links: Samura Heavy Industries : LWB : Watchers

AdamantineFist · 10-27-2008, 03:24 AM,

Check out On Heaven and Earth, in my sig. I have horrible problems getting the dang thing finished, and could probably use a good push to get the rest of it done. I actually have a good chunk of the second part of it done, though, and just need to wrap up the first bit before I start posting it.

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