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[AdamantineFist]

Also, wanna point you all at my newest story, Arthur Hawkins. I say that only because I'm trying a new writing style on that one, tell me whatcha think.

I like it. I'm quite fond of that style of storytelling.


No comments on my story? :unsure:

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[Zapp]

Haven't gotten around to it yet, Fist. You're up next, then;)

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[jammi]

If you're looking for something to read, have a look at this. Can I have some feedback please?

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=25659


And Arthur Hawkins is great. I like the way the story is told by someone else and Arthur himself has a great twist in his personality. Need more though.

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News article library, feedback and content requests.

[Klaw117]

Could I have some feedback on my stories please?

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Carlos Rivera: Corsair Brotherhood Pirate - Retired, shifted to Tripoli Shipyard's Research and Development engineering teams
Anthony Cameron: Guild Core Bounty Hunter - Killed in Action, committed suicide after being trapped in Omicron Minor following its destruction
Juan Ruiz: Outcast Ghost of Razgriz Pirate - Killed in Action, killed by the Sirius Coalition Revolutionary Army during Bretonian piracy raid
Michael Winchester: Liberty Security Force Agent - Missing in Action, likely killed during Rheinland espionage mission or trapped in Rheinland Space
Eric McCormick: Order Pilot - Retired, shifted to planetside training of new recruits

Liberty and Nomad Backstory, Very interesting - read it!

[Jihadjoe]

I found this when I was looking through the stories. Looks like an interesting start.

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[n00bl3t]

Click signature picture.

Feedback on The Retriever would be nice.:)

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Anything I say is not intended as offensive, and to try and deliberately misinterpret it as such would be an attempt at trolling via misrepresentation.

It's not a conspiracy, it's localised bias. They're not intelligent enough to form a conspiracy.

[Akumabito]

I didn't get much feedback on the Likkma Harias start, hoodlum didn't like it so I stopped it and returned to rpol.

[Orin]

What!? I make Holly Hawkins and all the sudden there's Christopher Hawkins, and Arthur Hawkins.

<headdesk>

[n00bl3t]

I hate the name Holly.

(There is your feedback Orin.:P)

Anyway, both of them are married to Holly, and yes, that can happen in Sirius.

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Anything I say is not intended as offensive, and to try and deliberately misinterpret it as such would be an attempt at trolling via misrepresentation.

It's not a conspiracy, it's localised bias. They're not intelligent enough to form a conspiracy.

[Xing]

zapp jumped over mine T_T

too many hawkins I dont know anymore who is who

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