' Wrote:work in progress
aint sitting right with me for some reason, think I gunna move a bunch around
but let me know what you think so far (background has not been picked yet)
You could have the bull glowing a bit more, so it looks like a sun, just an idea.
enhanced the glow a bit, altered the edges of the ships to enhance blending with Crete, toned down the overlay of the Corsair Logo over the bomber to let the bomber stand out more.
EDIT: Argh, damn headache. Just noticed the size was supposed to be 700x200... confused it with a different thread. *headdesk*
Personally, other than being 50px over on the height, looks good from my stand point.
I was looking for on mine something more of an older looking spanish font to compliment the family there.
however this comp doesnt cary my library of fonts so went with the next best.
if you had something to accent yours I think would look good and spread across the bottom more.
the coloring and other fonts I think are good. and do love your techno borders you come up with.