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[Darkard]

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My first story based on the happenings of my character in-game.

I was wanting to write up a story for my character but I wasent sure how to get it going, but there have been a few interesting things happen to him in game in the past week or so. So I decided to base them on these events.
As such I may wall name actuall player in my story, I can imagine this is a bit Tabboo s I'm RP'ing for them in a way they may not want. But I will try to keep thier parts small and base them on thier In-game actions. If anyone does object to my interpretation of thier char then Ill change it or replace them with another.

I do have an overall plan for this char and his story development, so Ill be adding to this and explaining his actions and such a bit more each time.

Im a huge fan of the Discworld Novels and anything by Prattchet realy so alot of my insperation is from his work, especialy his way of revealing infomation to the reader.

Hope you guys like it, feel free to rip into it and all feedback is appreaciated. Ill also answer any questions, Even if they are "Why do you suck so much?"

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[Derkylos]

Well, I liked it...

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[Xydonus]

I liked it. It was well put together, including the lead-up to what happened. Very easy to read too, conversations where clear and concise :cool:...

Plus, I got mentioned!!! Woohoo!!! Thats a bonus point, haha...

Keep them coming.

I need to get Savage's story+background sorted out. Still working on Barricks.

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Barrick Mane {Merc}- History of the Manes
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