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Mike_Fire · (This post was last modified: 11-16-2008, 06:39 AM by Mike_Fire.)

[color=#990000]IGNORE THIS POST AND READ THE POST NUMBER 7...... Well you can still read that post.... But the most important is 7....Thank you for your time...

I have thought about creating an RP story of a Nomad... with LF nomad fighter...BUT...
I have change me mind... I think it would be better if I create an order character RP first....
Because I would learn how nomads RP

So... I have some ideas for it..

1rst Idea: It would be one of the last Indian American... For the story... I 'm thinking that he leaves liberty with his starflea because he thinks it is corrupted. He would know his blood origin because the history of his culture would have been transmitted from generation to generation (Father/mother to Son/daughter)... "The history of Earth"...
So i would like to know if it would fit in discovery...

If it fit in disco.... Is there any chances of getting that RP With someone playing a char Order in the community of discovery ?

Maybe the "Indian" could meet in sirius randomly an Order ship player.. The Indian would become curious and he would ask what is the purpose of the order...Then it would go on it's own in some improvisation...

If that doesn't fit.... Second idea: I could use one of the freelancer crew member of the Exodus..
But for that i need to think about how and why he would join the order ... (Look my story link in signature to see the crew members)

Maybe you guys could give me some advice...before i post any story... This is new for me... I never RP'ed the order... Please lead my way to it...

Strontium Dog - Rookie Mike Fire - Bounty Hunter Card 
 The Freelancer Captain Jeff Willdor's Log, Luxury Liner "Exodus" 
Liberty Navy - Lieutenant Rick Gunner
Cyborg-Durango.Flore - Story - Data & communication channel
 The Freelancer Vick Blaster's Log - Hunts Nomad/Wilds - He will join forces with The Order 
Help us to grow up by clicking on us =>

<= don't forget our parents family too.
Click here to see the dragon family

Xydonus · 11-08-2008, 07:42 AM,

The Order have always interested me... Wouldn't mind finding out myself some tips for RPing an Order character :cool:

Barrick Mane {Merc}- History of the Manes
Xydonus.Xavier
John.Savage {Smuggler} Bio/Logs of JS

Mike_Fire · (This post was last modified: 11-17-2008, 03:52 AM by Mike_Fire.)

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CAN admin delete this post... Thanks....

Lux · 11-15-2008, 03:15 AM,

First of all, if you really want to choose your 1st choice, they're Native Americans, not Indians. Indians are from India.
Anyways, I wouldn't suggest using your first suggestion, simply because transmitting something from generation to generation for the past maybe thousand years is unlikely at best; also, unless the family has been inbreeding for the past millennium, then the amount of Native blood in him would be an extremely negligible fraction.
I suggest you use your second option, simply because it makes more sense. However, the "I'm leaving 'cause Liberty is corrupt" has been very overused; try being more original than that. After all, in your story you don't have to start on Manhattan. You could just as easily be a criminal as a lawful.
In other words, try to think it through. If your character is going to be part of the Order, give him a negative experience with the Nomads or Das Wilde in his past.

THEY TOLD ME I COULD BE ANYTHING SO I BECAME A SIGNATURE PLS HLP

Mike_Fire · (This post was last modified: 11-15-2008, 03:48 AM by Mike_Fire.)

True about Natives...

Also you might be right about the generations... Discovery time line is too far in future for this... My freelancers capt. and crew aren't from Manhattan.. They just based themselves there on a remote island in the past... Now their home is Canaria and the ship... So there won't be any corruption back line...

Sooo... that's gonna be 2nd choice...
Now i must think about the story... it is difficult... But if you read my character bio post of Jeff Willdor... You'll see that their is a bio of one of my crewmen "Vick Blaster" he don't talk about his past... (WHY ? Because he lost everything in the past) I got to dig more now....

Strontium Dog - Rookie Mike Fire - Bounty Hunter Card 
 The Freelancer Captain Jeff Willdor's Log, Luxury Liner "Exodus" 
Liberty Navy - Lieutenant Rick Gunner
Cyborg-Durango.Flore - Story - Data & communication channel
 The Freelancer Vick Blaster's Log - Hunts Nomad/Wilds - He will join forces with The Order 
Help us to grow up by clicking on us =>

<= don't forget our parents family too.
Click here to see the dragon family

Lux · 11-15-2008, 03:48 AM,

:PGood luck, it usually isn't all that hard to make a decent RP story (for me anyways, but some factions are harder than others). Just go by feeling, and post your story in the Character Biographies section so you can get some feedback on it:)

THEY TOLD ME I COULD BE ANYTHING SO I BECAME A SIGNATURE PLS HLP

Mike_Fire · (This post was last modified: 11-15-2008, 01:49 PM by Mike_Fire.)

Thanks for the luck and advices HellFire0

Here this is my RP post about the Captain Jeff Willdor and his crew of Freelancers....

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...c=15871&hl=

In the last post of this story (post 9).... I have chosen Vick Blaster.... His goals are simple.... He had bad experience with the nomads in the past due to his travel for smuggling... Now as he tell the truth about his story to the captain and the other main crew... He wish to exterminate the nomad... For that they all heard rumours about The Order organisation and their objectives.... With the Help of the captain... Vick will try to get in touch with The Order...

Please read my last post in the Link... And tell me if this beginning of story for an new order pilot would fit in disco RP and among all other Order players...
The character will fly an Eagle... He will have an Freelancer ID as he is a freelancer... Then he will try to get in touch with the Order... If The Order can accept him as an independent Order Rookie Pilot... I will get an Order fighter....
For the ID i have many choices...
1. Order ID with Freelancer Reputation
or
2. Freelancer ID with Order Reputation
or
3. Order ID, Order Reputation...

But this ID IFF thing will come later the time to continue my story and set up for the eagle...

Also I would be pleased to RP that story with one or two other Order Player....

Voila...

Strontium Dog - Rookie Mike Fire - Bounty Hunter Card 
 The Freelancer Captain Jeff Willdor's Log, Luxury Liner "Exodus" 
Liberty Navy - Lieutenant Rick Gunner
Cyborg-Durango.Flore - Story - Data & communication channel
 The Freelancer Vick Blaster's Log - Hunts Nomad/Wilds - He will join forces with The Order 
Help us to grow up by clicking on us =>

<= don't forget our parents family too.
Click here to see the dragon family

Mike_Fire · (This post was last modified: 11-17-2008, 03:53 AM by Mike_Fire.)

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Sorry it seems it has not been seen for the post 7...

Can admin delete those post 8 and 3

Mike_Fire · (This post was last modified: 11-16-2008, 04:40 PM by Mike_Fire.)

I have more story for Vick Blaster...

Now this is a new link to Vick Blaster's Log ...
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=27131

Again feedback is welcome... Please take a bit of your time and read it...
Tell me what do you think....

I will add more in the log as i'm not finished to in gamma with me eagle...

Also thanks to Defiance... (Rouge in forum) for giving me a nice escort and RP in Omicron Minor

Strontium Dog - Rookie Mike Fire - Bounty Hunter Card 
 The Freelancer Captain Jeff Willdor's Log, Luxury Liner "Exodus" 
Liberty Navy - Lieutenant Rick Gunner
Cyborg-Durango.Flore - Story - Data & communication channel
 The Freelancer Vick Blaster's Log - Hunts Nomad/Wilds - He will join forces with The Order 
Help us to grow up by clicking on us =>

<= don't forget our parents family too.
Click here to see the dragon family

Daerune · (This post was last modified: 11-16-2008, 10:38 PM by Daerune.)

I liked the Story had a Few little mistakes but that's all good

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