Voices in the Dark Feedback

[Nomad]

Do tell, and be honest.

http://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=22635

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[Grumblesaur]

I'd take it you're Melissa, who PM'd Olivia in Kappa. You're an excellent RPer, keep up the good work.

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A way a lone a last a loved a long the riverrun, past Eve and Adam's, from swerve of shore to bend of bay,
brings us by a commodius vicus of recirculation back to Howth Castle and Environs.

[Derkylos]

Looks good, the titles are a little hard to read, and you might want to check with the harvesters about some of the story aspects of Gammu, make sure your stuff remains within theirs and vice versa.

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[Nomad]

Thank you for the comments.

Yes, my character is currently taking the name of Melissa.Fletcher since she is the person who is currently piloting the ship, though under considerable influence by me.

Now, little takes place on Gammu, and as far as I am concerned, it is very much a Zoner controlled planet.

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[Magoo!]

Weird. To say the least, but I like them (this one and The Voice).

[Grumblesaur]

Thank you for the comments.

Yes, my character is currently taking the name of Melissa.Fletcher since she is the person who is currently piloting the ship, though under considerable influence by me.

Now, little takes place on Gammu, and as far as I am concerned, it is very much a Zoner controlled planet.

What was the *THUMPING*, were you having a seizure?

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A way a lone a last a loved a long the riverrun, past Eve and Adam's, from swerve of shore to bend of bay,
brings us by a commodius vicus of recirculation back to Howth Castle and Environs.

[Nomad]

It is simply a mental shockwave that I was projecting to torture Melissa into doing what I wanted her to do. In a sense, you could hear - excuse me, feel - it too, just in a far more reduced form. It most definitely was not "thumping" to Melissa.

If you read the latest post, a series of logs from the quartermaster for the humans on Gammu 11 years ago, I actually have not infected her. Instead, I'm stuck in a Nomad Light Fighter, and only have a limited amount of control over the people who board.

No one has seen me yet, but they do keep getting mental images of what I am in terms of a mental projection(see sig and avatar).

If you're getting confused with the portion in the other story, "The Voice," that is far into the future, after I've been able to liberate myself. How, with what, or when, is going to be explained later.

I hope that clarifies the issue!

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[Nomad]

Voices in the Dark has been updated.

As those who have read it can see, it is told in a piecewise fashion. In other words, its told in several pieces, in a non-linear fashion.

I will not tell you the story. Instead, the reader will have to piece together the truth for himself or herself.

Please do give me feedback. It is appreciated and honored.

Thanks.

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[Zapp]

I find it very interesting and intriguing. Having flown with your Nomad in-game, I know you have rather good RP there. Can't wait to read more.

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