Feedback on Rare Game / Cold Vengeance

[Orin]

A little collaboration Leo and I started a few days ago. Some feedback would be cool.

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=32464


Edit: The next chronicle has begun, with a spinoff explaining things on the way.

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=32888


Edit II: Lots of updates, and Smoke and Mirrors has been kicked off. (Thank you, Zapp.)

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=32920

[Primus Avatar]

Was about time you chose a male avatar.


Anyway. I'm really impressed how you took this story seriously, it's fun to read.

Good job. (you too Trick)

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wassup

[Leo]

Aye it's fun to write, little bit of a change for me from my normal avenue's of writing. I'm enjoying playing as the new character.

~Leo

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You fear oblivion. Yet you forget. The universe remembers every atom of your being. Even dust hums your name in the dark.
Roleplay is dead. Long live Powertraders and PvP I guess.

[Zapp]

Always a pleasure Leo, and I like it a lot. Good work you two.

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[David Petraeus]

I'm thinking that some people might have just lost the game.

Meanwhile Orin, very nicely written duo-story. Keep it up.

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If Pershings can be pro Marine, so can I.

[Orin]

I'm really impressed how you took this story seriously

What does that mean?:mellow:

[Zapp]

I didn't lose the game til you said that, David. I'ma kill you. >.<

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[resurexxxion]

God D**n you Petraeus.


I LOST THE GAME!

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Outcast cruiser Sylpheed
Cpt. Gelmiro Muro

[jammi]

The story is really good - it's one of the few stories I've been keeping tabs on for new posts. If you don't reveal why that massive bounty was posted, I'm gonna be upset, mmkay?

I'm thinking that some people might have just lost the game.

Meanwhile Orin, very nicely written duo-story. Keep it up.

I frikkin hate you!

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News article library, feedback and content requests.

[Leo]

The story is really good - it's one of the few stories I've been keeping tabs on for new posts. If you don't reveal why that massive bounty was posted, I'm gonna be upset, mmkay?

You'll get your wish soon.:)

~Leo

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You fear oblivion. Yet you forget. The universe remembers every atom of your being. Even dust hums your name in the dark.
Roleplay is dead. Long live Powertraders and PvP I guess.