Order| Signature/s

[Birdtalon]

With the concent of SwissScorch, I have come up with a Signature for Order players, completely free of charge.

I have recently applied to Join the Order| with my character Lee.Brandon and i thought this would be a nice thing to do.

This will be close to the final release.

KEY:
Rank - Will be replaced by your Order rank
Character Phrase - (Optional) Can be replaced by a slogan or tagline for your character/s
Order|Firstname.Lastname - Will be replaced by your Order character/s name/s

Please feel free to comment on it, things you like/dont like, ect.

Also please Pm me here if you want to do one for you.
(This offer is available for Order| tagged players only, if you want something like this then pm me and we can work something out.)

- Birdtalon (Lee.Brandon)

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[Xing]

it's.... very... busy?

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[Birdtalon]

Ok, should i take out the people?

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[Captain]

it like you stamped 100 sigs in 1 sig, its mildly said ugly and busy very busy

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[Xing]

I honestly dont know where to start... everything seem just slapped together randomly, there's.. no precise colour scheme... the blue "laser" effect seem way too much and low quality (I can see the pixels), ships are everywhere and not using the same lighting, nor are they put in an orderly fashion that makes aesthetic sense... hum...

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[Tenacity]

Too much color, you'll notice that most signatures people use around here are very simple and 'clean'.

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[Guest]

Was this drawn by someone under the influence of Liquid Cardi?

As yue said its very busy.

[ioha]

Uwah. What Yue said.

For starters, use similar colours for one signature. No greenvioletbluewhite mashup.

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[Birdtalon]

Haha back to the drawing board as they say

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[Birdtalon]

Ok, thanks for the insults... *cough* i mean advice:laugh:
No really thanks, i want to get better!

I ripped a load of the stuff out and came up with this, its very close to the first one, because i like the style and didnt want to lose it just yet.


Please keep critisizing after all i need to learn!

So.. if you think it still stinks like a pile of Nomad poop then please say!

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