LRF ZOI

[Tabris]

http://i30.tinypic.com/mvqkpc.jpg

This is something i made for the Liberty Revolutionary Front in my spare time.

If something does not make sense then tell me so i can either explain or fix it, just tell me what you think and try to be gentle, my first prototype map so i know it sucky.

[Violette]

I like the LRF alot, you guys have done awesome RP to the RHA and SCRA. ANd I see Ben Warner alot these days....



The map is good, *thumbs up*.

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[Birdtalon]

I like the map - I suggest making the text at the side clearer. At the moment it all merges together if you see my point.

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[Violette]

Or do the coloured overlays, like big rings.


I like those.

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[hack]

Um, just a heads up, Illinois is the Guard System of the LPI. Also, Virginia and Puerto Rico are missing

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Formerly known as LPI Police Chief Hull O'Brien.
Creator of Sgt. V. Price, 207th Precinct out of Chula Vista Station

[Marcus Lindberg]

Why is Alaska considered part of your ZOI? Its Liberty's biggest secret, how would your organization know about it?

Or am I mistaking Alaska as a part of your ZOI when its not...

[Birdtalon]

Yes, it isn't very clear, I suggest that you have some indication of which systems are actually your ZOI

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[Tabris]

Hrn, it seems clearely marked when i look at it.

And it says on the side that Alaska and Guard Systems are excluded in the ZOI.

As for the reason acouple systems are missing, well this is just a Prototype map and i'v only worked on it for 20 minutes.

[Tabris]

Ok, here's a slightly updated version, i'v made the words on the side bigger and will work on it more Sunday.

I call this version Alpha .02 (Still requires some tweaking and graphic cleaning up, but it's updated nontheless)