"Procurator" Battleship Model

[Montezuma/Kukulcan]

My suggestions:

• Make the texture slightly lighter, not much, just slightly, it looks very dark atm, like burnt wood, a few shades lighter would be nice. And perhaps make the textureing larger, it will look slightly less detailed, but you will loose the shimmering effect from the cramped and detailed textures.
  
  
• Make the bow curve in a convex manner, like that of the Osiris, the current 'snowplow' looks a bit odd.
  
  
• Remove the small fins on the bow, they look out of place on such a large ship, and rather pointless.
  

Other than that, im loving the general shape of it, looking fantastic so far amigo.

In regards to the name, i would vote for 'Lictor', as not only does it make sense, it also sounds rather intimidating.

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[Curios]

My suggestions:

• Make the texture slightly lighter, not much, just slightly, it looks very dark atm, like burnt wood, a few shades lighter would be nice. And perhaps make the textureing larger, it will look slightly less detailed, but you will loose the shimmering effect from the cramped and detailed textures.
  
  
• Make the bow curve in a convex manner, like that of the Osiris, the current 'snowplow' looks a bit odd.
  
  
• Remove the small fins on the bow, they look out of place on such a large ship, and rather pointless.
  

Other than that, im loving the general shape of it, looking fantastic so far amigo.

Actually, that's meant to delete all that done and start from the untextured model, making hardpoints is boring 8( So, maybe i'll do that if i'l find a time.
For real i like the current model with all ideas i apply here. So, maybe just remaking textures. But remaking model = remaking all, i have no much time now, and with getting closer to exams I'll start getting less and less free time.

To be honest that mean that model probably will didn't be changed, but thanks for replying =)

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[Sprolf]

I.....



I may just have to make a Corsair character.
Keep the snowplow - it's unique, and seems very Corsair to me.
It's very reminiscent of Triremes or Biremes, etc - which also probably fits the Corsairs.

Also, the wings on it don't really look good.
Maybe it's just me, but they seem not to fit the rest of the model.









(Unrelatedly, it's safe now, you can go to hell. It's frozen over.)

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[Shagohad]

Those wings on the prow need to be curved. I showed it to a friend and he said, "Where are the tell-tale horns?" So make them more like horns/blades. I see Corsairs as liking to ram with pointy bits. And all other cap ships have spines/spikes.

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"THE HULL HAS BEEN BREACHED AND THE SCIENCE IS LEAKING OUT!"

[DartStriker]

So, the model looks awesome.

You know what poly count you're running at?

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[Sprolf]

Horns are bad.




Don't listen to them.

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[sovereign]

I'm with Sprolf here. Snowplow of doom is good. Drop the wings, and perhaps try like Montezuma suggested and lighten the texture a bit.

Now I'm inspired. Someone needs to show me how to make the most basic of models so I can get the Tuning Fork of Death off my notebooks and into a .cmp...

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[aerelm]

Ohwow! Can you send me the files so I can fly it in SP for now ? D:
First I saw this model (back in page 2 or so) I was like "This thread has a big Fail!" but Now I change my mind, This one is a Win! Ditch the ossie from corsair shipyards and put this one there instead!

[Blaze]

I want it. Give it a Meduim BS ower core

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[Varok]

Wings are cool! :angry:

The only thing that should be changed is the texture, but not too much, just some more details and perhaps a lighten color.

And yes, that plow its cool, very cool. The ship without the wings would look like a dagger. Me dont likes daggers.