ok i Applied for Ageira Technologies Recruitment
this is what i put down
In Character Part:'¢Name: Noonien Soong
'¢Date Of Birth: 788 A.S.
'¢Sex: male
'¢Previous Jobs: I worked as an independent trader
'¢Skills: trading/working large ship
'¢Place of Birth: USS _Enterprise (A).
'¢Department Interested in Joining: Transportation Division
Please answer all the following Questions:
Why do you want to join Ageira Technologies?
dad work as a independant trader for a long time when i got old enough he gave me the ship and after 1 year working for myself i would like a corp flag under my name
Have you ever been charged with crime or have a criminal Record? If so what for?
nope.
Do you have any skills that you think will benefit you in the field you requested?
I always fly as fast as I can so I am able to get the best relation between profit and the time being used to make it. i try to talk myself out of fights.
Tell us about yourself.
born on USS_Enterprise (A) my was pretty normal for a life for a captains son
Lol I remember one time on the USS_Enterprise (A) he told a pirate to go to ****
Well the pirate destroyed the ship we were in escape pods for 3 days
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OOC Information:'¢Character Names: USS _Enterprise
'¢Timezone: GMT-5
Do you have your own vessel you will be using?
yes i own a Barge
Have you been sanctioned within the last six months?
yes
Internet disconnected and was killed when I was offline so i forgot to report it
and i got this
Mr Soong, your application has been denied.
pls tell me what i did wrong and anything i can do to impove my application
any opinion on what i can do to do better?
Im back baby! may even start CODEYs again but will have to see how Bases affect that who know maybe i will save for a base
I think it is important for Ageira to see where you are, RP speaking.
So just type up something that you are happy with and send it in.
I am sure you will find they won't just disgard you and if they do happen to find something wrong with your application, will talk to you about it.
My advice is to use a spell checker as well. It makes any application easier to read and understand. Also, look at other applications to see what worked, and what didn't work for them.
Edit: Try to flesh out your story a little more as well. Talk about where your character has been, and what he has done in the past.
Quote:"Do you have any skills that you think will benefit you in the field you requested?
I always fly as fast as I can so I am able to get the best relation between profit and the time being used to make it. i try to talk myself out of fights.
Tell us about yourself.
born on USS_Enterprise (A) my was pretty normal for a life for a captains son
Lol I remember one time on the USS_Enterprise (A) he told a pirate to go to ****
Well the pirate destroyed the ship we were in escape pods for 3 days
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This would concern me as well... as you say you "talk your way out of fights", but have been in a situation before that your character's father (I'm guessing) "told a pirate to go to ****". I am not certain of Ageira's policy but I also doubt they will allow you to fly a barge as a newcommer into their faction unless you have permission. Finally, if you see any Ageira, or any faction you want to join in-game, try flying with them sometime. Once they get an idea for your RP, and how you act, it will give them a better picture of who you are, instead of just text.
And, even if your name is trekky, I suggest you remove all your Star Trek references. This isn't a Star Trek game, and ships aren't called USS-Something.
I don't think Ageira likes their employees to say 'Lol' and tell pirates to go to <blocked>.And I think they want members who remember to post on the forum when they dc...
I would not accept it because USS Enterprise creates a picture in my head that is not compatible with Discovery. If I see the USS-Enterprise, Captain Picard buying gold ore in Dublin, I shake my head every time.
The Disco universe is one of great possibilities. Why play a character that doesn't belong there?
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