In the year 802 A.S., 1 year after the Nomad War, a group of loyal Navy officers joined together to make the Secret Fleet. Their primary goals was to get the Nomdas out of their home colony! But they early realized, that something has changed. Now the time has come, where the money is leading! More and more people betray their factions! Zoner helps Pirates, the Bundschuh helps the Rheinland Military, and Nomads helps the Gallic Royal Navy. But we don't need this kind of people in Liberty. We don't need corrupt guys! We want to get them out!
Goals:
Helping Bretonia, to get their systems back from the Gallic activity and defend Liberty against Rheinland and Pirates. We have missions, where only 1 person or 1 little group do a job. But then that missions are only for that person or that group. The "jobbers" don't tell their goals to others then. (= reason for secret).
Diplomacy:
Allied:
5th Fleet
Liberty Navy
Liberty Security Force
Liberty Police Inc.
Liberty corporations
Friendly:
Bretonia Armed Forces
Bretonia Police Authority
Bretonian corporations
The Council
Interspace Commerce
Bounty Hunters Guild
Neutral:
Everyone else
Hostile:
Criminals
At War:
Rheinland Military
Rheinland Police
Marinenachrichtendienst
Gallic Royal Navy
Gallic Royal Police
The Hellfire Legion
Nomads
The Wild
Recruitment:
We are in look of LNS's and other Navy Soldiers willing to do more than good for our home colony! We need YOU! If u want to help us, and become a member of the Secret Liberty Navy Fleet, then fill out the paperwork and follow further instructions.
You just described the LNS in a nutshell. It is already a group of its own. It is not an official faction nor it is an unofficial one. Your writeup is fine for the most part, but your group lacks anything new you could bring to Liberty.
I can see that you are a fairly new player. Protip, please do not try and create new groups in the first year of your joining. In a year you will look back at this post and facepalm hard. I can guarantee that. Personal experience.
I suggest either just leaving it be and let be, or considering a twist, a certain idea behind your faction to make it different from what we have now. Because what you created is basically a LNS subgroup within the LNS, sharing the exact same ideals, goals and terms.
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(02-03-2014, 02:34 PM)sindroms Wrote: You just described the LNS in a nutshell. It is already a group of its own. It is not an official faction nor it is an unofficial one. Your writeup is fine for the most part, but your group lacks anything new you could bring to Liberty.
I can see that you are a fairly new player. Protip, please do not try and create new groups in the first year of your joining. In a year you will look back at this post and facepalm hard. I can guarantee that. Personal experience.
I suggest either just leaving it be and let be, or considering a twist, a certain idea behind your faction to make it different from what we have now. Because what you created is basically a LNS subgroup within the LNS, sharing the exact same ideals, goals and terms.
That are other factions too! And read what i wrote under the threat man! U don't have to say that!!! And I'm not new!
Quote:Helping Bretonia, to get their systems back from the Gallic activity and defend Liberty against Rheinland and Pirates.
You just literally quoted the LN ID + 87 storyline.
Quote:We have missions, where only 1 person or 1 little group do a job. But then that missions are only for that person or that group.
Which is basically individual RP? But again, that is individual RP.
Quote:Helping Bretonia, to get their systems back from the Gallic activity and defend Liberty against Rheinland and Pirates. We have missions, where only 1 person or 1 little group do a job. But then that missions are only for that person or that group. The "jobbers" don't tell their goals to others then. (= reason for secret).
Again, you pretty much created an LNS group. 4 sentences alone do not make a group unique and useful to the RP environment.
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Quote:Helping Bretonia, to get their systems back from the Gallic activity and defend Liberty against Rheinland and Pirates.
You just literally quoted the LN ID + 87 storyline.
Quote:We have missions, where only 1 person or 1 little group do a job. But then that missions are only for that person or that group.
Which is basically individual RP? But again, that is individual RP.
Quote:Helping Bretonia, to get their systems back from the Gallic activity and defend Liberty against Rheinland and Pirates. We have missions, where only 1 person or 1 little group do a job. But then that missions are only for that person or that group. The "jobbers" don't tell their goals to others then. (= reason for secret).
Again, you pretty much created an LNS group. 4 sentences alone do not make a group unique and useful to the RP environment.