Possible wild character

[Colonel Z.e.r.o.]

I was wondering yet again how to adapt the true story of another character (Felyse Von Schneider) for FL.

The essential story is she's an officer from a long line of proud military history. Her country along with others similar to ones today (RL wise) are at war with another country with people of Arab/African descent. these people use ideals and past dealings with other civilizations and races (like slavery and white devil concepts in order to dehumanize other ethnic groups and break down the sympathy the people of that nation have regarding starting a massive war with them) as propaganda to rally the government, military and population into a war of justice and claim the rightful dominance of the X nation (name pending). Due to both their population/economy and the vast amount of raw materials they have at their possession as well is their acquired ability to hunt so precisely within a nebula (which 40% of their home system is covered by and borders much like how the GMG was able to out smart the RM in the eighty) they were able to effectively hound and wear down the borders of other nations for years.

Somewhere else in another country allied to the char in question a Major Zero (acronym ofor his real name) is an adopted son of a famous Navy captain, he, frustrated with his boring life joins the navy. After several months of basic fight training he is assigned escort duties for 5 new experimental bipedal tanks (Xenopeds) Around the same time the X nation has agreed to sign a cease fire to end their bloody war with the other nations. However this is just a setup, thus necessitating the creation (or should I say reverse engineering is the case of these experimental of the Xenopeds). At the same time in the confusion Felyse on a patrol with her squadron his ambushed by several wings of attack fighters her fighter squadron with full intent of sacrificing themselves allow her to retreat to a nearby communications base she lands to make vital repairs and have the base crew relay a message to the nearest command installation. However almost seconds after she makes her landing a detachment from the X nation's bomber squadron manages take down most of the station's primary systems and compartments and killing almost everyone onboard.

Major Zero after having to land his fighter due to engine trouble lands back on the transport ship of the Xenopeds at that time his step-brother is as usual interrogating him in matters regarding his personal life and his plans for the future (future family, wife, kids, etc.) during which the ship alarms go off notifying the distress that a nearby comm station is in (the same one our heroine is on). The captain coldly ignores it and attempts to remain on course. Major Zero still young and confused about the duties of a soldier and more importantly, a man futility argues with the transport captain. After realizing there's no time to argue nor any point he rushes into the hangar to find an appropriate ship (seeing as his own was damaged to use to help rescue any survivors. There he discovers one of the 5 secret projects a black and yellow bipedal tank with two twin laser cannons mounted on it's back and laserblades on each arm. Painted on it's lower left leg is it's codename the "Black Sun". Ignoring the dammings from the transport captain Zero launches the machine and heads for the base at full speed.

Felyse also making an attemp to help any survivors still on board. She enters a room reserved for refugees and to her horror discovers the smoldering remians of a mother and infant. She colapses and throws up in disgust, disorented and shocked by her discovery (she's still a novice in many respects namely on the psychological level). she hurries back to the docking bay to escape but is thrown back by a subsystem explosion which colapses the ceiling crushing her shipp in the process tightly gripping the back of her head in pain she loses conscienceness. After finding a stable docking port he lands and begins to seach on foot for any survivors. Eventually he finds Felyse in another hangar just meters away from a light fighter crushed by rubble. Noting that had she been a bit hastier he would have needed a spatula to get her from out of that place. With an awkwardly admiring stare he reached down to grab her helpless body when her eyes opened to catch a glimpse of the man that saved her. Rushing back into the Xenoped he blasted his way out from the station into the vacuum where his step brother and fellow comrades were waiting with both pessimism and anticipation. While being scolded for his disobedience another fighter/bomber patrol jumps in to finish all remaining vessels in the area. His brother tells him to retreat to another sector to avoid being captured or scanned (his vessel is very top secret they wouldn't want it to fall into the wrong hands;)) reluctantly pulling away from the battlescene he looks from his rear monitor the bloody fight taking place.....

After successfully making it to an allied control nav point enforced by several cruisers and a battleship (Felyse's home base). In the confusion and of fighting off several fighter wings and attack vessel's the battlegroup completely unaware of both the existence of both a Xenoped of that caliber and it's standings begin to open fire on Major Zero, dealing relatively mild damage due to the advanced armor and shield systems. In an attempt to stop the onslaught he opens a comm. channel with the ship's captain to no avail, as that only entices the ship crews to continue their assault. (our hero is very similar to the enemy soldiers in terms of appearance dark skin, red eyes (an adaptation the people of the X nation underwent which actually makes the more distinguished from the regular non-X nation blacks and Arabs that are found in other settlements and back on earth) The shooting only comes to an end when the captain recognizes the woman lying in Zero's lap of which had saved earlier, his daughter. It's too late as the Major is knocked unconscience by the impacting shots.

EDIT: Some how I was looking to make very, very brief synopsis of the origins of 2 characters who use the same name on disco and adapt them to FL more smoothly but I ended up making a summary for the beginning of my own personal story *sigh* either way some good feed back for this little piece is good too. I'll continue tomorrow and add the FL adaptation and how it's connected to this besides the names.

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Nathan's Log || The "Real Story" of Lenox Casper

[sovereign]

That's an interesting basis for a rather epic story, but, uh...

Hi, my name is Klaus Schneider, and I lead the Volksfront along with Viktoria Landser.

Hi, my name is Lenora Schneider, and I am a Sergeant in the Rheinland Military.

Hi, my name is Hektor Schneider, and I am an able and willing servant of the Nomads.

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Not to mention the rest of the family that have names and may get characters attached to them. Granted, the Schneider family has some pretty serious military history, but the name resemblance will likely cause more problems than it is worth.

Still, keep working on the adaptation, and I'll make sure to read it.

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[Colonel Z.e.r.o.]

Same name wasn't intentional. Just looking for a name that's easy on the tongue. Like Bianca Chevalier easy to remember it's to vocal what script is to print connected, merged, syncronized.....

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Nathan's Log || The "Real Story" of Lenox Casper

[sovereign]

I know it wasn't intentional, which is why I thought you should be aware of it. I've got quite a few links I use for naming, if you need any just PM me and/or ask here and I'll bump the thread I put them in.

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[Colonel Z.e.r.o.]

I'm wondering if instead of the current name.

I should change it to Freja Von Gneisenau, Freja Gneisenau, Faye Von Gneisenau, or Faye Gneisenau.

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Nathan's Log || The "Real Story" of Lenox Casper

[FooFighter]

I'm wondering if instead of the current name.

I should change it to Freja Von Gneisenau, Freja Gneisenau, Faye Von Gneisenau, or Faye Gneisenau.

I'd suggest Freja or Freya, as Faye isn't really a German name.

[Colonel Z.e.r.o.]

I was thinking it could also be a nick name of sorts cause in the original story Zero has a bit of trouble pronuncing German words and names. which often end with him being chased around the ship by the crew members Although Freya thinks it's cute...still resulting in the wrath of the jealous crew.

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Nathan's Log || The "Real Story" of Lenox Casper

[Colonel Z.e.r.o.]

Whatever the case I don't think I should even log in until her basic story is done.

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Nathan's Log || The "Real Story" of Lenox Casper

[Colonel Z.e.r.o.]

Sorry to bump this as it's pretty old. But I'm still open to suggestions.

I'm thinking of changing it ti Athena V(alkirie). Mekdulfe or Makdulfe or Mekdulphe or Makdulphe. Since her name is borrowed from the Greek goddess Athena her weapon (Either her blade 13 inches, or her mecha will be codenamed the "AEGIS".

What do you think?

THX again.

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Nathan's Log || The "Real Story" of Lenox Casper

[mwerte]

I'd suggest starting from the beginning and making your chars start in the FL universe.

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