Please go to that link and tell me what needs to be changed
in it or what you think of it. and so on.
Do note his age will stay the same. The crew is young and
so is he. In Sirius you have to fight to survive and he
fought enough to be recommended as the new
owner of the Tenabras Fleet. Another reason
why he is a bit cocky at times.
ALSO Is his DOB right? I did the math and I suck at it
so please tell me if its right or not.
Well, aside from the fact that in the Sirius calendar its 816-817 A.S. and you have his marked as being from 1985 of the Gregorian calendar it looks alright.
You might want to consider adding more to it though, it looks somewhat plain when not focusing on the character.