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Character List

✓ = added to the list below | ★ in-depth/history rich character
Primary Factions or Main Characters
Name	Origin	Faction/Group	Status
Ivan Petrov	Coalition	SCRA| Sirius Coalition Revolutionary Army	On call
Natasha Romanov	Coalition	*VI| Volgograd Industrial	On call
Samantha Hale	Liberty	Core| The Core	On call
Delusional Wolf	Liberty	LR- Liberty Rogues - [PG] Pirates Guild	On call
Primogenitor / Incognito	A.I.	tC- The Collective	On call
Secondary Factions or rarely played Characters
Name	Origin	Faction/Group	Status
Adam Rockford	Liberty	=ASF= Alliance Star Fleet/The Order	On call
Ju-Long Li	Kusari	BD| Blood Dragons	On call
Tertiary Factions or Characters on Hold
Name	Origin	Faction/Group	Status
Salih Arslan	Rheinland	Tigris Rebels (Middle Eastern Coalition Rebels)	On call

Deceased or Abandoned

Deceased or Abandoned
David Haydari	Malta	(C~ The Commune	Abandoned
Mirtrrak	Nomad Worlds	K'Hara| Slomon K'Hara	Abandoned
Barbaros Hayreddin	Unknown	*SoS*- Shades of Sol	Dead
John Hayter	Liberty	[ASF] Alliance Star Fleet	Abandoned

Keep the Feedbacks coming! These are my RP Characters and their Lore:

Ivan Petrov (Commissar)

SCRA Backstory

Formerly inside the Army, Rank Colonel

Born in Kusari by Coalition Parents which lived secretly among the Kusari People. Spies, so to say. They were spotted when Petrov was just a young Boy and got killed infront of him. Ever since that day he was searching for his Parents origin. The Stories they've told him and thus once he grew up, he moved to Rheinland, to find the route to the Coalition.It was since then when he met the Red Hessians, that then put him through a Secure Transport towards the Coalition System, Omega-52. It was then when he joined the Revolutionary Army and started as a Militia.His first months were very interesting, the coup of the Premier and almost a Civil War outbreak. Petrov has chosen the side of Dmitry Dubovik and the coup was then initiated by many. After that a new Golden Era of the Coalition Revolutionary Army started. This has brought him to great Victories and Glorious Wars across Sirius and he earned the Rank Colonel

Coalition Commissariat

Currently inside the Commissariat, Rank Military Commissar

The Commissariat has chosen to Transfer him according to his Capabilities, which made him a Military Commissar inside the Coalition Commissariat. Since then, he has been a High Ranked Commissar, earned the title of Military Commissar and is continuing his service to the Coalition inside the Commissariat.

Salih Arslan (Middle Eastern Coalition Rebel)

Red Hessian Army

His Story begins in the Hessian Army as a Soldier that has been in Revolutions since years. This isn't just the Hessian Revolution, his Parents history go way back inside the first Rheinland Revolutions, Piracy. Countless Battles has thought him how hard a Life as a Revolutionary Soldier is. Thus he wanted to be part of something bigger, bigger than just Rheinland. His message was to the whole Sirius Sector. Across the possibilities of becoming a Pirate or a Terrorist, he has chosen Revolution over all. He cared for the people of Rheinland, hence why he could not bring himself harming Civilians, unless it's necessary. This has made him a Solid Infiltrator/Scout later on, as he improved himself in Battle. He has chosen to change from a simple Soldier in the front line into a Scout and Spy.

Coalition Commissariat

Over years his skills in Scouting and Recon has improved deadly to his opponents. His aim of a message to whole Sirius and not just Rheinland has made his ties to the Sirius Coalition Revolutionary Army stronger. This was the time where Salih met Ivan Petrov, which was Captain back then. Their bond grew strong, they fought many battles together in the end, Salih has joined the Revolutionary Army. After skills evaluations he has finaly shown himself capable of beeing a Commissar. His first "real" duties inside the Coalition has started from here, from now on he was a Commissar inside the Coalition. As the Commissariat grew and it became an important role inside the Coalition, the Council of Commissars was established. It was then when he heared that Petrov became Military Commissar and was happy to cooperate.

Coalition Rebels

After becoming victim to all the lies of the Commissariat, Salih then decided to collect a couple men amongst his people of the Middle East. Spreading the alarm amongst his compatriots he soon began to form a coalition between the middle eastern communities. Thus the Rebellion began and they branded it as Anatolian Remnants soon to become the Coalition Rebels.

The Incognito Entity (Primogenitor)

Primary Artificial Intelligence

The Unit is pretty much Unknown to Mankind. Unknown as it name sounds, it's Pulse and interaction is very enigmatic, making it even harder to understand what purpose it got amongst the Artificial Intelligent Species.

The Collective

Lately spotted inside the Collective. But soon exposed itself as Primogenitor after the Collective Core collapsed.

The Harvesters

As Primogenitor, the Unit now follows its true destiny/path into full Sentience in becoming a Harvester.

Samantha Hale (Bounty Hunter)

Formerly Liberty Navy and Backstory

She was born on Planet Los Angeles in the California System. Her mother died after birth. Her dad went missing in a recon mission, he served the LSF. She decided to join the Navy, that one day she might see him again, to make him proud. Life was harsh as she was a little suspicious about her future in the Navy. That day she couldn't hold it longer and that life wasn't the life she wanted. She left the Navy. Decided to become a Freelance Bounty Hunter, suited her life better. More action and under noones command. That was until she decided to side with Core against the Alien Threats.

Bounty Hunters Guild

As a bounty hunter, she used her armored Gunship, the 'Aran', a Liberty Defiant, to hunt pirates and other dangerous forces. Her presence amongst the Guild didn't last long when she departed for the Omicrons.

From the Federation to Core

As of late she pledged her allegiance to the Sirius Star Federation and is carrying on her duty as a Bounty Hunter alongside her Ship, the 'Aran'. As the Federation are strong supporters of the Core and their Military Force, Samantha frequently crossed paths with the dangerous creatures called Nomads in active duty. She built up Skill and Experience while she was serving the Core up in the Omicrons and became a fine Soldier.

Adam Rockford (Fleet Admiral of the Alliance Star Fleet)

From Core to Order

Seen rejoining the Core but as of late has turned sides leading the Star Fleet into a more aggressive approach, the Order.

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[SnakeLancerHaven]

//the Coalitioners should be somewhat finished, I suppose. Other ones are on my Doc file, I'll try to upload em tonight.

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[SnakeLancerHaven]

//added the rest on my Doc file, will continue the rest another day.

EDIT: For some reason the Mirtrrak Spoiler wont open, can any Mod Team take care of it? Thanks! So the problem is when you click on it, it doesn't open.

EDIT2: Nvm I found it, it was because of the ' on K'hara, so I just wrote K Hara and it worked

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[Flash™]

+1 for the SR and Coalition characters. Had some encounters, was fun. : )

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[Techpriest]

+1 for the K'hara characters. had one encounters, was very hot and tense.

[SnakeLancerHaven]

Ha! Thanks alot guys x))))))))))) Such nice words motivate me =D

Keep the feedbacks coming!

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[axisdeus]

Had 1 K'Hara character encounter..was very disappointing...nice way of ruining other people's fun...
Well, next time I will de-log hearing you cloaked around me. I bet you had time to see the empty of nanos cargo hold...
Moreover, I even went away from the FP to see what this encounter will lead to...well, it lead very fast to a gank...
10/10 well done!

Rahotep

P.S. No Apocalyptic message heard either...just 3 per-setted messages.

[SnakeLancerHaven]

Maybe if you'd fly a Character that is a little lesser hostile to a Nomad, because certainly Order is actively hunting Nomads instead of simple Zoners. Secondly, the appearance of the Wilde Gunboat was a total surprise to me uncloaking in the middle of nowhere, though it served me well because I had no CD's at that time, you've had enough time to Flee too you know I gave you that oppurtunity, you even cruised like 3 times but always stopped kinda like you intended to fight me anyway. Speaking about Gank, I call a Cruiser and a Gunboat against a Geb hardly gank, because the Gunboat literally appeared very late and I was fighting you already by then.

Thanks for the feedback!

P.S. If you're seeking for the RP of this Nomad, try to meet it alone. K'Hara surely had bad experience in Omicrons, whoever sees a K'Hara just engages unless it's a Zoner. Though lately things have calmed down a bit, maybe we can try again? ^-^

Also: http://abload.de/img/screen4n1j7j.png

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[Chuba]

Hello I had great experiance with your K'hara keep up :3

[SnakeLancerHaven]

Thanks for the feedback guys! :>

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