Feedback on my Legacy story

[Heartless]

Hi everyone!

After some weeks after my return I've finally figured out how I want to re-integrate myself into the Order. A few minutes ago I posted the first part of the story that will continue the legacy of Sius Malacos, my former Order character who used to be Grand Admiral and vanished without a trace.

http://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=137253

I would really like to work with Order| on this as I am making a few assumptions, mainly that we don't have a set reason as to why the Battle of Omicron Minor happened or how the Nomads managed to get there with their weapon that destroyed Toledo etc. Given the circumstances of Sius Malacos' disappearance and story that he had been infected by a Nomad, I figured it would at least be a fun rumor and something I can pursue with my new character.

More about this character you will all find out about in due time.

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SwissScorch --> Heartless

[Omicron]

This is bit awkward considering Order|CV-Svizra is doing fine and continues to serve in our fleet. But I suppose we can work something out.

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[Heartless]

This is bit awkward considering Order|CV-Svizra is doing fine and continues to serve in our fleet. But I suppose we can work something out.

Wait really??? Haha, ok I'll take the name of the ship out then, and just refer to it as the former command ship of Sius Malacos or something.

Nice to see that same ship is still around though!

Edit: I changed the name Svizra to some other term to refer to that ship.

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SwissScorch --> Heartless