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Feedback thread for Akiha_Omori
Offline Akiha_Omori
03-04-2018, 08:19 PM, (This post was last modified: 03-11-2018, 01:56 AM by Akiha_Omori. Edit Reason: Updates )
#1
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Starting one of these so I can accept feedback on my character(/s).

My characters and ships are:
-Akiha_Omori - My main. A kusarian freelancer currently piloting a Condor in Liberty.
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You can tell me anything here as long as it is OORP and relates in some way to my characters or behaviour in-game or on the forums.

Cheers!

Feedback thread | Akiha's Diary | Akiha's background (Not uploaded yet) | Charsheet | Guncam repository (Warning, some big files there)
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Offline Emperor Tekagi
03-04-2018, 09:52 PM,
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I really like that story of yours. It feels truly like daily written log entries, that's something others need to train before they manage to write it this way.
I can't get myself to leave out that reading about Wilfred makes me like him. A good one when he doesn't mention the transponder, hehehe. Jokes aside, looking forward to meet your char in space. I see potential for an interesting interaction there! Keep it up! (sun)
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Offline Akiha_Omori
03-04-2018, 09:59 PM,
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Wowie!
Didn't expect such a kind review so quickly!
Thanks!
(And I'll be sure to let Wilfred's player know about you mentioning him)

Feedback thread | Akiha's Diary | Akiha's background (Not uploaded yet) | Charsheet | Guncam repository (Warning, some big files there)
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Offline The League
03-04-2018, 10:06 PM,
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Come Jumptrade with us again.

We loved your company <3

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Offline Akiha_Omori
03-04-2018, 10:07 PM,
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I'll be sure to do that!
Writing about how Akiha made sense of all the new stuff she experienced was immense fun for me and a large step in her development I think!

Feedback thread | Akiha's Diary | Akiha's background (Not uploaded yet) | Charsheet | Guncam repository (Warning, some big files there)
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Offline Arant
03-04-2018, 10:17 PM,
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Oh my god, I knew I recognized the name!
You were that freelance ship I saw in Bering today. I'm glad you got out when you did seeing as a NEMP bomb was dropped two minutes after.

I was wondering what a random Freelancer was doing in a tense situation like that ..
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Offline Akiha_Omori
03-04-2018, 10:43 PM,
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Yeah. Doesn't matter if they are friends-of-friends in-rp, 5 Red contacts armed to the teeth still makes you nervous when you try to fly by and make as little noise as possible.

I did see the aftereffects of the NEMP bomb. Gather some of the Unioners died to it?

Feedback thread | Akiha's Diary | Akiha's background (Not uploaded yet) | Charsheet | Guncam repository (Warning, some big files there)
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Offline Nekrotalis
03-04-2018, 10:55 PM, (This post was last modified: 03-04-2018, 10:58 PM by Nekrotalis.)
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Well one fighter, one cruiser and the Forlorn which fired it killed his comrade as well. Luckily i wasn´t near the jump gate when it happened, i guess my cruiser would also have pulled the short one and exploded. I have to say you are brave for sticking around in such a tense situation even when it shifted to the Freeport, my respect for it. (I was the last remaining UN| cruiser which fought at the Freeport)

Also pretty nice story so far in my opinion.
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Offline Akiha_Omori
03-04-2018, 11:06 PM,
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Thank you!
Yeah, I guess the guncam shots of the fight proved to strong of a lure for me (or Akiha) to resist.
That and I could justify it as Akiha and Wilfred getting close to the deadline on their contract with Harmony, so in order to get paid they had to risk it... you know how it is.

Feedback thread | Akiha's Diary | Akiha's background (Not uploaded yet) | Charsheet | Guncam repository (Warning, some big files there)
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