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I should also mention that it looks like i'm a fresh player at a first glance, but I've actually been around for the better part of a decade officially. Seems like all my posts have gotten archived or wiped, I heard there was a server crisis that happened a while ago while I was on hiatus.
Edit: To clarify on my history, I was heavily involved with 2017-2018 BD|, Led by Jeremy Hunter and subsequently Shizune. I had a character named Hisano Kimura and I was in the HC of that faction. My first faction mid 2015 was SCRA|. Between 2016 and 2019 when I roughly left for a hiatus, I hopped around in factions like MRG|, BDM|, =CR=, Core|, Order|, LH~ as Niall Dunne, and a small faction called Sector 8, not sure what that was anymore. Hell, I'm still in all of those old Skype chats. I think it was a trading faction of sorts to support a POB? Well, whatever it was, it's long gone now. Wish I could remember the names of all my characters. Looking at old account descriptions in the launcher, looks like my MRG| was Adelie Devereaux and my BDM| was Erika von Giengen. Maybe I'll revive those someday.
Hopefully you can breathe a sigh of relief knowing I'm not just some random trying to start a BD faction.
Change the Kanji to; 薔薇龍, 薔薇の竜 is a bit too literal and 薔薇龍 is a lot better.
竜 is a simple version of 龍, but I would say when paired with the notoriously difficult Bara (rose) Kanji the more difficult character pairs better.
Plus, the Yakuza games Japanese name is 龍が如く (Like a dragon) and that is sufficient proof which is cooler.
You have my kudos for the lore. A good read. I would only suggest to remove the "barbarians" part from your highest rank - it implicitly refers to Kusarians as "barbarians", i.e. you are calling yourself barbarians unless you distance yourself from your Kusarian origins. The kanji refer to the period of Japanese history when the shogun was chairing campaigns against the Ainu people, who were barbarians in Japanese image. Needless to say, the main target of the BD are other Kusarians of the same culture, so simply "Shogun" (将軍) might suffice.
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