First Graphic Art Job

[Incindre]

I was recently was asked to create a catalogue for a local wearable arts show in my region.
I was given the poster that had already been made for the same show by another person and it was quite frankly horrible. But I tried to stick with the same theme and created this as the main page for the catalogue.
Please tell me what you think.

http://i442.photobucket.com/albums/qq145/I...gueMainPage.jpg

Thanks all

Incindre

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[Tenacity]

Looks... professional, not sure what kind of feedback you're asking for =P

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[Incindre]

Well just tell me if it looks good pretty much! Tell me where I could improve or what elements should be included to achieve a better effect.

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[Weedalot]

looks good.

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[sean24]

Looking good. Maybee one thing, at the bottem it might just be a little too red.

[Incindre]

Looking good. Maybee one thing, at the bottem it might just be a little too red.

Yea... thats because its a red carpet. But I see your point but I don't really want to fill it with anything unless the client is unhappy.

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[Bauer]

Pfft St Peters school....:P


It looks good. I don't like the red bit at the bottom though.

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[Dopamino]

Never mix Web 2.0 style with Grunge style.

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[johnpeter]

Looks good, can't think of anything wrong with it...

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Come on! Be free!

[Jaigan]

The red should not "leak" through the Film strip, keep the carpet behind the film and your all set.

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