the story of goa'uld

[Exile]

The story of goauld.


It was a nice day on the planet of Azura, the birds were singing, the sun shined, and you could feel a little breeze on your cheek, the perfect day for every Azurians.

Until.

The sun darkened, the wind turned into a storm, and the birds fled.
The Azurians looked up to the sky, there was a huge dark cloud shrouding everything, suddenly strange dart like things came down from the cloud, and shot with fire to burn everything.
Then, another cloud appeared, started to shoot with fire against the dark cloud and his darts. The good cloud set down on the burned and dead ground of Azura, and opened a door, a portal of light.


A man came out, much like the Azurians but, different in some way.
The surviving Azurians did not doubt for a second, knowing they would die if they stayed with their burned homes, and got aboard the strange, metal looking cloud.


The remaining Azurians have adapted to their new home, the battle ship of goauld, and now work upon the ship as its crew.


While still looking for any other remaining Azurians, the Captain and its new crew now fly trough sirus, searching for any other survivors.

Many generations of the Azurians have passed aboard the ship of goauld and most of them have forgotten what their goal is. The captain some how still lives, searching to complete his goal.




, now how do u guys like that ?:D lemme know pls

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[Captain of the goa'uld]

i thank you, my good friend Veers, for posting that ( had some trouble with registering).

i will now contineu with the next chapter:

chapter II

while exploring their new surroundings, called sirus , the Azurians discoverd that the Rheinland battleships look allmost the same as the dark cloud their anncestors onboard their first days of the Goa'uld had drawn down, after doing even closer research, the Azurians discoverd that The dark cloud that shrouded their prevous home world, a prototyp of a rheinland battleship was.

engaging in a brutal fight with the Rheinlanders, inflicting heavy losses on their opponents, The Azurians returned to safe ground, and were able to intercept a rheinland prison ship, which appeared 2 be carrying innocent people, that looked real familliars to the Azurians.



pls gimme some comments on how u like this :D if its annoying il stop;)

[ghostcat]

i thank you, my good friend Veers, for posting that ( had some trouble with registering).

i will now contineu with the next chapter:

chapter II

while exploring their new surroundings, called sirus , the Azurians discoverd that the Rheinland battleships look allmost the same as the dark cloud their anncestors onboard their first days of the Goa'uld had drawn down, after doing even closer research, the Azurians discoverd that The dark cloud that shrouded their prevous home world, a prototyp of a rheinland battleship was.

engaging in a brutal fight with the Rheinlanders, inflicting heavy losses on their opponents, The Azurians returned to safe ground, and were able to intercept a rheinland prison ship, which appeared 2 be carrying innocent people, that looked real familliars to the Azurians.
pls gimme some comments on how u like this :D if its annoying il stop;)

hmmm... keep it up
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........Once more unto the breach, dear friends, once more;..........But when the blast of war blows in our ears,.....
........Or close the wall up with our English dead...........................Then imitate the action of the tiger;.................
........In peace there's nothing so becomes a man........................Stiffen the sinews, summon up the blood,.........
........As modest stillness and humility:........................................Disguise fair nature with hard-favour'd rage!....

Dasher

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