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Offline Tomtomrawr
09-21-2009, 02:00 PM,
#1
Guardian of the Void
Posts: 3,224
Threads: 242
Joined: Nov 2007

So, welcome. If you are actually looking in here, I thank you. I write very few stories, and characters come and go regularly, so I have very few stories. But if you wish to read any, I would very much appreciate it. I would appreciate it even more if you read one, or all if you have time, and then post your opinion here.

Again, I appreciate it.

The Personality Dysfunction series:

Chapter One: The Concealed Foes - The characters are introduced and plans begin to form.

Chapter Two: The Armoured Mind - Macdeath's somewhat copyrighted plan is revealed and his allies and enemies are shown.

Chapter Three: The Artificial Entity - Macdeath begins his assault whilst his "allies" prove troublesome. He faces an unfortunate death.

Other work:

The Ancient Madness - Another entity stored in a similar device to that of Macdeath, this is the story of its beginnings.

The Genetic Madman - The next man in the bloodline of a family known for their insanity.

John Mantral, the Story of a Rogue - My old Liberty Rogue character. Rather short unfortunately.

What a Wonderful World... - Joint role-play between me and Vrouw, a Phantom and my old Bounty Hunter having a nice dinner.

So, have fun, and I hope you like my stories.

[17:45:39] Wolfs Ghost (Murphy): Tom, you have problems. Go kill yourself.
[19:25:12] Johnny (Jam): Tomtom, I will beat you with a spoon.
[14:22:56] Prarabdh Thakur: KILL HIM WITH A SHEEP.
[17:40:48] Eagle (Junes): Tom should be slapped with a spoon.
[11:32:18] Warspite: Thank you for being so awesome Tom. <3
[18:17:36] Metano: I love you tomtom
[20:06:24] Warspite: I will seriously give you epic head.
' Wrote:Edit: also, Tomtomrawr, fappin' like a boss.
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Offline AJBeast
09-21-2009, 04:23 PM, (This post was last modified: 09-21-2009, 04:24 PM by AJBeast.)
#2
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...Again ?:PAtentionwhoar! When is the next Personality Disfunction coming out ?
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Offline Tomtomrawr
09-21-2009, 06:50 PM,
#3
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Posts: 3,224
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Joined: Nov 2007

' Wrote:...Again ?:PAtentionwhoar! When is the next Personality Disfunction coming out ?
I've been very busy at the moment, juggling the extra homework, FL, Fallout 3 and stories around. So I haven't been up to much writing recently, except that joint role-play with Vrouw and Daniella Kay's new story.

And I made a new thread because this is the new section for that kind of stuff.

Aaaand, it's Dysfunction.

[17:45:39] Wolfs Ghost (Murphy): Tom, you have problems. Go kill yourself.
[19:25:12] Johnny (Jam): Tomtom, I will beat you with a spoon.
[14:22:56] Prarabdh Thakur: KILL HIM WITH A SHEEP.
[17:40:48] Eagle (Junes): Tom should be slapped with a spoon.
[11:32:18] Warspite: Thank you for being so awesome Tom. <3
[18:17:36] Metano: I love you tomtom
[20:06:24] Warspite: I will seriously give you epic head.
' Wrote:Edit: also, Tomtomrawr, fappin' like a boss.
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Offline Tomtomrawr
10-13-2009, 07:49 PM,
#4
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Posts: 3,224
Threads: 242
Joined: Nov 2007

I'm back to me writing! Added two new installments to the Personality Dysfunction, enjoy folks.

[17:45:39] Wolfs Ghost (Murphy): Tom, you have problems. Go kill yourself.
[19:25:12] Johnny (Jam): Tomtom, I will beat you with a spoon.
[14:22:56] Prarabdh Thakur: KILL HIM WITH A SHEEP.
[17:40:48] Eagle (Junes): Tom should be slapped with a spoon.
[11:32:18] Warspite: Thank you for being so awesome Tom. <3
[18:17:36] Metano: I love you tomtom
[20:06:24] Warspite: I will seriously give you epic head.
' Wrote:Edit: also, Tomtomrawr, fappin' like a boss.
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Offline Tomtomrawr
10-17-2009, 09:22 PM,
#5
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Posts: 3,224
Threads: 242
Joined: Nov 2007

I've really been busy with the Personality Dysfunction, I have written several new parts and edited all of the previous parts in one way or another.

[17:45:39] Wolfs Ghost (Murphy): Tom, you have problems. Go kill yourself.
[19:25:12] Johnny (Jam): Tomtom, I will beat you with a spoon.
[14:22:56] Prarabdh Thakur: KILL HIM WITH A SHEEP.
[17:40:48] Eagle (Junes): Tom should be slapped with a spoon.
[11:32:18] Warspite: Thank you for being so awesome Tom. <3
[18:17:36] Metano: I love you tomtom
[20:06:24] Warspite: I will seriously give you epic head.
' Wrote:Edit: also, Tomtomrawr, fappin' like a boss.
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Offline Tomtomrawr
10-21-2009, 06:15 PM,
#6
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Posts: 3,224
Threads: 242
Joined: Nov 2007

The first chapter of the Personality Dysfunction is almost complete, and then Chapter two can begin.

I've been writting more and more recently, so make sure to keep checking in:).

[17:45:39] Wolfs Ghost (Murphy): Tom, you have problems. Go kill yourself.
[19:25:12] Johnny (Jam): Tomtom, I will beat you with a spoon.
[14:22:56] Prarabdh Thakur: KILL HIM WITH A SHEEP.
[17:40:48] Eagle (Junes): Tom should be slapped with a spoon.
[11:32:18] Warspite: Thank you for being so awesome Tom. <3
[18:17:36] Metano: I love you tomtom
[20:06:24] Warspite: I will seriously give you epic head.
' Wrote:Edit: also, Tomtomrawr, fappin' like a boss.
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Offline Tomtomrawr
10-21-2009, 08:36 PM,
#7
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Posts: 3,224
Threads: 242
Joined: Nov 2007

The first chapter is completed! The second chapter shall be started tomorrow, make sure to tune in folks!

[17:45:39] Wolfs Ghost (Murphy): Tom, you have problems. Go kill yourself.
[19:25:12] Johnny (Jam): Tomtom, I will beat you with a spoon.
[14:22:56] Prarabdh Thakur: KILL HIM WITH A SHEEP.
[17:40:48] Eagle (Junes): Tom should be slapped with a spoon.
[11:32:18] Warspite: Thank you for being so awesome Tom. <3
[18:17:36] Metano: I love you tomtom
[20:06:24] Warspite: I will seriously give you epic head.
' Wrote:Edit: also, Tomtomrawr, fappin' like a boss.
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Offline Tomtomrawr
10-22-2009, 03:33 PM,
#8
Guardian of the Void
Posts: 3,224
Threads: 242
Joined: Nov 2007

Chapter Two: The Armoured Mind has been started!

[17:45:39] Wolfs Ghost (Murphy): Tom, you have problems. Go kill yourself.
[19:25:12] Johnny (Jam): Tomtom, I will beat you with a spoon.
[14:22:56] Prarabdh Thakur: KILL HIM WITH A SHEEP.
[17:40:48] Eagle (Junes): Tom should be slapped with a spoon.
[11:32:18] Warspite: Thank you for being so awesome Tom. <3
[18:17:36] Metano: I love you tomtom
[20:06:24] Warspite: I will seriously give you epic head.
' Wrote:Edit: also, Tomtomrawr, fappin' like a boss.
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Offline Tomtomrawr
10-26-2009, 09:57 PM,
#9
Guardian of the Void
Posts: 3,224
Threads: 242
Joined: Nov 2007

Chapter Two has been a change for me. I have invited several other people to post there, and a meeting has taken place. I wrote a massive new part that contained the meeting, took well over an hour to write.

Enjoy it folks.

[17:45:39] Wolfs Ghost (Murphy): Tom, you have problems. Go kill yourself.
[19:25:12] Johnny (Jam): Tomtom, I will beat you with a spoon.
[14:22:56] Prarabdh Thakur: KILL HIM WITH A SHEEP.
[17:40:48] Eagle (Junes): Tom should be slapped with a spoon.
[11:32:18] Warspite: Thank you for being so awesome Tom. <3
[18:17:36] Metano: I love you tomtom
[20:06:24] Warspite: I will seriously give you epic head.
' Wrote:Edit: also, Tomtomrawr, fappin' like a boss.
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Offline Tomtomrawr
11-08-2009, 01:39 PM,
#10
Guardian of the Void
Posts: 3,224
Threads: 242
Joined: Nov 2007

And Chapter Two is finished. Hope you enjoy it folks, I'd like to thank everybody who posted there to help the story. A special thanks to Seth Karlo, without him I would of gotten nowhere fast.

[17:45:39] Wolfs Ghost (Murphy): Tom, you have problems. Go kill yourself.
[19:25:12] Johnny (Jam): Tomtom, I will beat you with a spoon.
[14:22:56] Prarabdh Thakur: KILL HIM WITH A SHEEP.
[17:40:48] Eagle (Junes): Tom should be slapped with a spoon.
[11:32:18] Warspite: Thank you for being so awesome Tom. <3
[18:17:36] Metano: I love you tomtom
[20:06:24] Warspite: I will seriously give you epic head.
' Wrote:Edit: also, Tomtomrawr, fappin' like a boss.
Reply  
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