Feedback on a completed story and my RP plan

[stardust47]

Finished story.
Bishop's Green: Dark Passion Play was one of those I had to finish. Also, my RP plan:
Get the crew back together on a Zoner Gunboat (will RP it out) and write a story. The poll is about what I should call the story when I do get them back together.

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[Mounteblanc]

Um. Yeah, okay, that was very interesting.

So, a few things.

Why was a Junker hauling Nommie remains for the Order?

Why did the Order set him up with Cardamine?

How did he get back to Rochester so quickly?

Where did Trent supposedly wtfpwn some Nomads?

How did they move the Nomad?

Why did Chris chase an unknown ship through so many systems?

And, what was going on with Jack's girlfriend? 'Ohai, your back from prison, sorry, your girlfriend got possessed by aliens'?