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Wilde what-if story
Offline Corsair
02-01-2010, 12:07 AM,
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Well, I'm writing a what-if story, relating to the Wilde. If you spot any lore errors, please let me know. Other than that, reading and pointing out grammar errors would be awesome.

I am still developing the story, so more sections will be released soon.

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=59223

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Offline Corsair
02-01-2010, 01:27 AM,
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The story is complete, and I really do want some feedback on it.

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Offline Akura
02-01-2010, 01:29 AM,
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I like it, alot.


The bit where he was carrying her, then she was dead... I was like.. The fu- oh! Coooooool!




I liked the mouth rape too, nomad throat intercourse is crazy shiz dude.
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Offline Corsair
02-01-2010, 02:03 AM,
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Meh, this is just me reading the Lore a few times, as well as Aoi Iseijin and Wilde Message Dumps. Thanks for the feedback, Akura. Glad to know my 2~ish hours of writing wasn't wasted.

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Offline Akura
02-01-2010, 02:15 AM,
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Arrange something with me on Skype sometime and you could meet up ingame.

Then see what you think of Iseijin, can't help you with Das Wilde though.
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Offline Corsair
02-01-2010, 02:17 AM,
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I'll be home in a few hours. I hope. Then I'll ring ring ring Nommanna phone you.

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Offline Akura
02-01-2010, 02:19 AM,
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I have to sleep now, it's 1:20am.... then I have college all day tomorrow. Drop me a message and we'll do it sometime in the next few days perhaps.


Effing timezones.
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Offline Corsair
02-01-2010, 02:26 AM,
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D:<

5:20 pm here. MATH TIEM...

You're eight hours ahead of me. That will complicate things. I have no school tomorrow, so tomorrow would have been an awesome time to do stuff. But meh.

Sorry, then.

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Offline Boss
02-01-2010, 02:41 AM,
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I approve of the story. Rampant grammatical errors and typos notwithstanding.

*muses*

Zealot Wrote:Just go play the game and have fun dammit.
Treewyrm Wrote:all in all the conclusion is that disco doesn't need antagonist factions, it doesn't need phantoms, it doesn't need nomads, it doesn't need coalition and it doesn't need many other things, no AIs, the game is hijacked by morons to confuse the game with their dickwaving generic competition games mixed up with troll-of-the-day.
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Offline Corsair
02-01-2010, 03:30 AM,
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D:

Examples? I hate imperfection.
HATE.

Imagine the Roc in the following picture is imperfection. And the big blue ball of death is the edit button.

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn183/A...pg?t=1264991395

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