The Sol Expedition -Feedback

[Pacific]

Well have been doing this Rp story for some time so i was hoping for an a opinion from you guys i have encountered some players. So i hope for your opinion. If you dont know abut this expedition here is information and the Current logs.

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[Szerano]

Very nice story, but you'll have to go into more detail me thinks. Your searching for earth not where cherries are grown (trying to make an obvious statement there lol) The more you go into detail with your rp, the better it becomes. If you can make this thing stretch an entire 40 paragraphs just describing how you go the information from the hispania, that will count loads then anything else. Try to keep our main goal and sub goals in your head when you write and repeat this to youself: "Take it slow, it will be worth it in the end..." Oh and I just noticed you do in-game work as well...*facepalm* this is still good advice if you can copy the logs and actions you encountered in-game into text then that will help too...

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