Just checking

[stewcool]

Can someone look into the Player Character Emilie Cross

this is like my first page I made by myself and it would be wise for someone to check and see what I did wrong.

//the main page for the character is still being worked on...that I dont have skills in just yet.

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[tazuras]

Pretty good. Could use a tiny bit of editing for proper english, but the writing is good.

As for the rest, I would link A.G.S. to the AGS page (which defines it) instead of defining it on the page.

Also I would put the picture of the Valor in a thumbnail box instead of just hover there on its own. Additionally I would right align that thumb and put it at the top of the section so it ended up directly below the infobox.

Here is the the code for my suggestion:

Code:

=='''Battleship Revin'''==
[[image: Valor-GRN-s.png|thumb|right|200px|Richelieu]]

PS. If you do this you could also increase the size of the image to 250px, making it about the same size as the infobox.

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[stewcool]

Thanks I'll do that now, I added the ship as a last minute thing and didnt quite proof read the entire character stuff when I made them.

So if you see any errors please tell me them or you can fix them yourself.

EDIT: whoever changed the battleship revin infobox bit thanks for that. I was trying to figure out how to do that
but got stumped.

Oh and another thing, Tazuras if I add to the section, change the section, in Emilie Cross where it shows Battleship Revins description to something more lengthy that would drop the code to a lower area correct? Thus making it no longer under her infobox.

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[Akura]

Character picture is huge, making the quality seem lower :/


Overall, not bad at all for a first try.

[stewcool]

It's dimensions are small compared to the profile. which is kinda odd, any idea how to fix that Akurawr

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[Akura]

Yeah, need a wider picture, it stretches it to fit it to the box.

[stewcool]

*facepalm* how smart of me to delete the original.....I'll go fix it.

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[Akura]

Battleship looks much much better in the infobox now, I could nitpick the spelling and grammar of the whole article if you like.

[stewcool]

Oh you have fun with that! Haha for the battleship revin bit in the Emilie Cross one just ignore it and fix it in the actual page for the Revin, I'll be removing the one on Emilie Cross soon and adding to her story.

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[tazuras]

Oh and another thing, Tazuras if I add to the section, change the section, in Emilie Cross where it shows Battleship Revins description to something more lengthy that would drop the code to a lower area correct? Thus making it no longer under her infobox.

Yup, you can always move it though. Remember, the preview button is your friend.

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