My first attempt

[Sirius]

What you say??

[Crusader4]

Its nice, however, wraith looks a bit odd,
did you decrease its height?

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Hate will eat you up from the inside, so hurry up and give your heart to a girl before you get eaten up.

[Sirius]

Yes, I have decrease the height.

[Crusader4]

Yes, I have decrease the height.

I see, try not to do it,
keep the proportions at 1:1 as much as you can.

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Hate will eat you up from the inside, so hurry up and give your heart to a girl before you get eaten up.

[Sirius]

I will try, thx.

[jakub963]

Its really good. Simple and nice but i have to say the same as Crusader4... keep the proportions...

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