The.Old.One

[iron6266]

Greetings

This is the Feedback forum for the story of The.Old.One, this is my first time makeing a RP story on the forums so thaughts and comments are apprichiated.


Please post your thaughts and comments here for the history of my character The.Old.One. If this gets a lot of positive feedback i may post Story that happens on a real time basis or in other words RP on the fourms with other characters for the old one for:).

[Panzer]

You. And a story.

Uh, how about you concentrate on writing?

Exclusively?

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[CzeReptile]

While you ask for a feedback, I have to say that meeting your ship in space have been rather unpleasant and not really much satisfactory. I shall not explain this public, but you should know.

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[Aphil]

I'm afraid meeting you in-game hasn't particularly been a pleasant experience. Your story also contains many spelling and grammar mistakes.

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[aerelm]

I'm just wondering... Don't you ever get tired of sitting in front of Java all day and firing Mortars at it even when no one's around?

And as a related note, Your character's "RP" is currently at the very edge of Powergaming, you might want to reconsider it. People generally don't like it when someone flies up to their base when there are not many ships around, fires a few shots at the base and then starts taunting how the station is taking damage and soon will be no more.

P.S: You've been running and camping the Sun corona on every occasion I've seen you in game when you've been facing a firepower that wasn't in your favor, which had left a rather "meh" impression on me so far.

[Schatten Research Facility]

Do you happen to have a RM BS going by the handle JAREK_RM?

[iron6266]

Do you happen to have a RM BS going by the handle JAREK_RM?

NOPE


and to the other comments

Q_Q

Correct me if im wrong BUT last time i checked Role play in whatever form is engouraged on this server, Now Trollololololing me to death isn't exactly going to encourage me to Role play is it. The few times i have tried to roleplay in tau 23 all i got was "OH FAT DRED LETS SHOOT IT!"
YOU WANNA PVP AND NOT RP FINE! thats ok with me but dont Q_Q and troll my Feedback topic with stuff that happend in-game! take it somewhere else

[Korny]

NOPE
and to the other comments

Q_Q

I wouldn't call it Q_Q'ing, they are merely stating their opinion on your "RP"...Which is kind of the point in this feedback thread, or not ? If you can't handle bad feedback at all don't open such a thread.

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[iron6266]

I wouldn't call it Q_Q'ing, they are merely stating their opinion on your "RP"...Which is kind of the point in this feedback thread, or not ? If you can't handle bad feedback at all don't open such a thread.

The point of this thread is for the story not the character and over the past 2-3 days ive compleatly changed my RP

And the whole point on feedback is that they actually give suggestions on how to improove one's RP

[pruskis92]

in short, you suck. haven't seen your story, but I am sure that my mind won't change even if I'll waste my time reading it.

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