• Home
  • Index
  • Search
  • Download
  • Server Rules
  • House Roleplay Laws
  • Player Utilities
  • Player Help
  • Forum Utilities
  • Returning Player?
  • Toggle Sidebar
Interactive Nav-Map
Tutorials
New Wiki
ID reference
Restart reference
Players Online
Player Activity
Faction Activity
Player Base Status
Discord Help Channel
DarkStat
Server public configs
POB Administration
Missing Powerplant
Stuck in Connecticut
Account Banned
Lost Ship/Account
POB Restoration
Disconnected
Member List
Forum Stats
Show Team
View New Posts
View Today's Posts
Calendar
Help
Archive Mode




Hi there Guest,  
Existing user?   Sign in    Create account
Login
Username:
Password: Lost Password?
 
  Discovery Gaming Community Discovery General Discovery RP 24/7 General Discussions
« Previous 1 … 327 328 329 330 331 … 779 Next »
RP Help from any high ranking Order

Server Time (24h)

Players Online

Active Events - Scoreboard

Latest activity

Pages (2): 1 2 Next »
RP Help from any high ranking Order
Offline Caedes
05-18-2011, 01:27 AM,
#1
Order Operative
Posts: 197
Threads: 21
Joined: Oct 2007

This may sound like a lot to ask, but I was wondering if any high ranking members of The Order would be ok to read any stories I have involving the Order?

Simply to make sure that any stories I write are acceptable.
I've read up on most (I think) Order pages and details but I don't want to go typing something up that will upset the High Command.
Reply  
Offline Jeremy Hunter
05-18-2011, 01:30 AM,
#2
Member
Posts: 6,094
Threads: 200
Joined: Jul 2009

Best put some links in so OHC knows where to look.

Also.

They can't be as radical as giving an 11 year old girl a Hathor Heavy Gunboat.

-J


Cant promise they'll look!

Edited.

And by they I mean your stories.
Edited...again.

[Image: jeremy10.png]
May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.
Reply  
Offline n00bl3t
05-18-2011, 01:47 AM,
#3
Member
Posts: 7,448
Threads: 108
Joined: Mar 2008

I can have a read over and PM you any feedback.

Post links here or PM them to me.

I am also available on Skype. (Which is listed on my profile.)

[Image: hG0lGaj.png]
Anything I say is not intended as offensive, and to try and deliberately misinterpret it as such would be an attempt at trolling via misrepresentation.

It's not a conspiracy, it's localised bias. They're not intelligent enough to form a conspiracy.
Reply  
Offline Huhuh
05-18-2011, 03:11 AM, (This post was last modified: 05-18-2011, 03:15 AM by Huhuh.)
#4
Member
Posts: 2,458
Threads: 148
Joined: Apr 2010

' Wrote:They can't be as radical as giving an 11 year old girl a Hathor Heavy Gunboat.

Please don't tell me that's what you've done.


Another good group to contact would be the Keepers as they have a very specific vision of the nomads that most people don't know too well.

[Image: 6fZYcda.gif]

Reply  
Offline Jeremy Hunter
05-18-2011, 03:15 AM,
#5
Member
Posts: 6,094
Threads: 200
Joined: Jul 2009

' Wrote:Please don't tell me that's what you've done.

((sun))

[Image: jeremy10.png]
May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.
Reply  
Offline Anonymous User
05-18-2011, 03:38 AM,
#6
Member
Posts: 2,052
Threads: 132
Joined: Nov 2009

Lolmiral Lollister reports in... eh... eh wait.

/serious mode on

post some links and I read through as well if I have a bit time here and there.

]
  Reply  
Offline Caedes
05-18-2011, 10:39 AM, (This post was last modified: 05-18-2011, 10:40 AM by Caedes.)
#7
Order Operative
Posts: 197
Threads: 21
Joined: Oct 2007

Alright I'll put it up. I'm open to criticism!

Name : Marcus Ward
Age : 20
Birthplace : Spacer, born on board the Zoner transport 'Astral Runner', raised on Freeport 11.
Height : 5' 7"
Weight : 128 lb.
Appearance : Brown eyes, black hair, average build, no distinguishing features

Current Role : Covert operative, Intelligence and Surveillance
Current Rank : N/A
Current location : Texas, posing as a Mercenary under Liberty Naval contract to escort Liberty supply convoys carrying suspect cargo


Subject : Transfer Request

Marcus Ward has been working for The Order since the age of sixteen, where he would eavesdrop on the conversations of various pilots (mostly Bounty Hunters) and pass any relevant details to Graham Palmer, one of our operatives who has permenant residence on the station. Thanks to the information provided by Marcus over the years, many pilots have been saved as well as several vital supply shipments. Marcus was recruited into the Order at the age of eighteen, when he expressed his desire to join The Order to Agent Palmer.

As Marcus has no previous combat experience, in space or on the ground, there weren't that many options for him. Because of his previous assistance to The Order in the role of gathering intelligence, Agent Palmer contacted Major Finn (commanding officer of The Order Intelligence Wing). Major Finn already knew of Marcus and had no problem with Marcus being a covert operative, seeing as he had being doing the job for two years. Marcus was put through Covert Operative training which covered Intelligence gathering, Surveillance, Advanced flying, Basic space combat, basic small arms use and advanced hand to hand combat.

Many covert operatives struggle with the loneliness and independance, as they are constantly changing identities they cannot have friends and they have little to no contact with The Order, they pass information to and receive tasks from various contacts throughout Sirius. Marcus had no such problems.

Unfortunately, the LSF may now recognise Marcus as an Order operative. One of our agents on Atka research station has disappeared, we have not been able to find out where he is but we have intercepted transmissions which name several names and false identities used by the various covert operatives active in Liberty. It is safe to assume that our agent has been captured and information has been extracted that places several operatives in danger.

3rd Recon Squadron successfully pulled the compromised operatives out of Liberty and they are now on Toledo being briefed on their options. While the normal course of action is for them to become analysts at their parent unit, Marcus has requested a transfer to the secondary fleet.

Seeing as we have no shortage of Intelligence analysts, I do not think there is a problem in Marcus trying his hand at flying. We could always use more pilots and according to his training reports, he has shown a decent level of leadership and the ability to remain calm in almost any situation. Provided he is as competent pilot as he was a covert operative, I could very well see Marcus eventually becoming the CO of a ship.

-- Lieutenant Tucker, 3rd Recon Squadron, Intelligence Wing.
Reply  
Offline Omicron
05-18-2011, 06:46 PM,
#8
The Order
Posts: 4,745
Threads: 386
Joined: Nov 2009

' Wrote:As Marcus has no previous combat experience, in space or on the ground, there weren't that many options for him. Because of his previous assistance to The Order in the role of gathering intelligence, Agent Palmer contacted Major Finn (commanding officer of The Order Intelligence Wing).

Commanding officers of Order Inteligence Division - acronym 'Wedjat' are admiral Golanski (RP'd by me) and Spymaster X (RP'd by n00blet) if that could help. Also feel free to join Order primary fleet. We would like new members and your character backstory is nice.

[Image: E9d8RnV.jpg?1]
Reply  
Offline Jeremy Hunter
05-18-2011, 06:57 PM,
#9
Member
Posts: 6,094
Threads: 200
Joined: Jul 2009

' Wrote:Commanding officers of Order Inteligence Division - acronym 'Wedjat' are admiral Golanski (RP'd by me) and Spymaster X (RP'd by n00blet) if that could help. Also feel free to join Order primary fleet. We would like new members and your character backstory is nice.

And if ya need any help with Wedjat, Im free to help you. James,Patterson might be,able too as well, not to mention Dave Synk.

Overall, very nice. Well thought out, works well, and yeah, only problem was the Intel Division head.

Welcome to the Order.

*points to Omicron* he's the go-to guy for Wedjat. Ask him about joining the world of spooks.

Good Luck. Keep on writing.

-J


[Image: jeremy10.png]
May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.
Reply  
Offline Jeremy Hunter
05-18-2011, 06:58 PM,
#10
Member
Posts: 6,094
Threads: 200
Joined: Jul 2009

Im.going to raeg at Verizon...double post...

[Image: jeremy10.png]
May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.
Reply  
Pages (2): 1 2 Next »


  • View a Printable Version
  • Subscribe to this thread


Users browsing this thread:
1 Guest(s)



Powered By MyBB, © 2002-2025 MyBB Group. Theme © 2014 iAndrew & DiscoveryGC
  • Contact Us
  •  Lite mode
Linear Mode
Threaded Mode