My First Piece of Art

[Toaster]

So, after fooling around with Paint Shop Pro 7 for a while, I created this:



Any good?

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Olivia Sable
On hiatus

[Febreze]

First Thought: Be better if the ship was facing the other way. (Front where the rear is). Amazin otherwise.

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[Rommie]

Good for a first. Reduce the intensity of that blue ray, and maybe put it behind the Osiris. Or reduce its opacity.

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In space, nobody knows I'm a panda

[Jaika]

nice one mate;)i'm not a pro with that stuff, really i'm a noob making pics like this...so i say IT IS COOL!!!

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There is no such thing as too much firepower.

[Toaster]

First Thought: Be better if the ship was facing the other way. (Front where the rear is). Amazin otherwise.

I agree, but in the ship's layer there's also a bad-ass explosion which I combined with the planet's star into that particularly bright flash. So, if I mirrored the ship, the explosion would be at the other end of the picture, ruining it.

Good for a first. Reduce the intensity of that blue ray, and maybe put it behind the Osiris. Or reduce its opacity.

Similar problem as with the above. The ray is part of the planet-picture. So if I reduce its opacity, the entire planet will be reduced too.

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Olivia Sable
On hiatus

[Venkman]

So, after fooling around with Paint Shop Pro 7 for a while, I created this:



Any good?

It is great

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Orex Armaments

[Toaster]

It is great

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Olivia Sable
On hiatus

[jxie93]

Well done.

Reduce the blue flare a bit, it gets annoying.

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[Toaster]

Well done.

Reduce the blue flare a bit, it gets annoying.

Meh. I'll try.

Edit: I tried, didn't work.

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Olivia Sable
On hiatus

[Commissar]

*Sniffles.*

It's beautiful... I would like to offer some more constructive feedback, but I can't hear it over how awesome that picture is.

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