Keeper story.

[Immunity]

Immunity used to work as a trader back, and forth threw new york system, and berlin system. He made just enuff to make a living, and he started noticing Rehiland navy following his ship to the jump gate to bering almost every day. A few months later he was on an average trade route to Berlin selling prisoners. Afterhe came out of the hamburg system rehiland navy fighters told him he was to come with them or be shot out of the sky. He guessed it was just a misunderstanding. They took him to the trade lane to new Berlin, but in the middle of the lane it was shut down. There his ship was attacked by a rehiland cruiser. His guns didn't last long as his entire ship was torn apart, and no longer flyable. He blacked out as the oxygen leaked from many holes in his ship. He woke up with a blurred vision. He suddenly felt pounding pain go threw his veins. He couldn't see anything at all. He soon blacked out 5 minutes later. He woke up in a steel square room Where he stayed for the next month. One day he was going to be put inside a Nomad ship. He had never seen or heard of Nomad before, but was in for a surprise. As soon as he was put into it he started hearing things in his head. He wasn't sure what they were, and suddenly the nomad ship that he was in started moving around the in closed space. The security tried to disable the ship, but it was to late, and began ramming room from room with Immunity in it. Then one more wall, and it hit outer space cosing a major leak in oxygen for the station he was in. Immunity did not know where he was or how he was flying the ship. Soon rehiland navy was all over him, but the small ship he was in dodged almost every shot easily. Immunity instantly knew how to fly the ship for some odd reason, and began flying as fast as he could away from the rehiland. He found a small gate that lead to the sigma 13 system, and continued fleeing from bounty hunters, and came to the omicron theta system still presuid by the bounty hunters. A group of Nomads came in, and destroyed the bounty hunters that were chasing him. Immunity had no clue what was going on. The Nomads spoke in his mind telling him to follow if he wanted to live. He was lead to a system unknown to him, where he found many more Nomads, and others like him who were called "keepers" He soon joined the keepers after extensive training.



- first story I have ever written....tell me its bad. :( also the story for my hoping to be keeper. -

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TalosIII-Kruger Miner
TalosIV-Freelance Trader

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[sovereign]

Hmm... needs some work for it, but its a good outline. If he's to be an infested human, you want to be writing a story for Das Wilde- the Keepers are for Hybrids like Taurvi and straight-out Nomads.

I would also suggest making a different name for him, "Immunity" is more of first character name...

I'll go bump my naming resource thread, see if you can find a good German name for him.

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