Second off, this is one of the best write ups I've ever seen for a biker gang type role play. Very well researched and obviously not done by just skimming the trailers for Sons of Anarchy. Extra kudos for the research and well done!
Some suggestions:
A) I understand that a female character can be a full member in an exceptional case (same with some real life MC's) but the normal role is that of either Old Lady or Public Property. That there is the option to be exceptional and be a full member should be a bit more clear.
B) Get with the governments in your various ZOI's. Without a heads up and cooperation between the factions you could find yourself in a difficult situation. Your goal is for the one percenters to be the outlaws & smugglers and that's cool. However it's been fairly common that after a few individual FR5's in a region, the entire faction is FR5'd for repeated violations, official or not.
That's fine for the one percenters but your normal trading members might find themselves unable to dock on more lawful bases at some point. It's something to consider and stepping up to the government factions ahead of time to stay in cooperation is likely to be the best thing.