IDs aren't handed out just like that, IFFs even less. You need to pick a pair from the existing set. Also, I think Zayne in his second question was asking for some URLs for actual roleplay content already existing to support your claims about relations between TKE and lawfuls.
Another flaw is the house chosen. Bretonia is inRP not in the shape to give away warships to any entity. Maybe some bombers and fighters but surely no cruisers and battleships.
Ok so im reading the tutorial and will figure everything out so i can re pitch the idea (or even maybe a better one XD) but i just want to say that im not giving up on this idea so hit me with all the criticism