I'm not saying that people use superpowers or magical artifacts in-game, but seeing it in the story breaks immersion. Freelancer, as a rule, doesn't have magical artifacts, so neither should the stories, really.
If you look at the other new faction posts going up, you'll see that the ones with most support from the community are the simpler ones that stick to the Discovery Universe, like the upcoming Workers Front.
Sorry if I sound overly critical, by the way, I am just trying to help, since you guys do seem to be wanting to put a lot of effort in.
well i didnt mean to come off as offended or aggressive in any way, but i do rather wish for the faction to become an offical one.
Hence why i am trying to put forth a lot of effort to make it liked by the community, the RP story at any rate. And i do want to thank you for taking the time to read all that BIG story and to respond to me.
heh, well hopefully the opions of others are a little bit more positive (no offense) heh because coming up with a new RP story (almost) is a bit taxing
ok, while i do plan on making my faction act as close as possible to the NPC Red Hessians, i just thought a neato story would be kool.
But again dont get me wrong, we do plan on RPin just the same as the RH, because we have joined them and fight along side them. We just have a unique history, at least the 4 of the members do.
See, new recruits wont be from Hiigara, because they are from Sirius (duh) so with due respect i dont intend in any way acting any different than the RH do in game
i think its a pretty good idea there....Artifacts shouldnt be a problem....Templars dont exist as well...and besides, the artifacts and the Templars came from the Hiigara-an world not the freelancer world(Sirius) so it doesnt matter whether it exists on freelancer or not....800 years ago is a long time...anything may have happend...artifacts may have lifespan(perishable) over a few hundred years...the last one that let out the Hiigara before perishing might have been a unique one...
its just a story...whatever exist or not on freelancer dont really matter..
Its a good RP story...i give u credit for the time and effort for writing such a long one...well done..
You have my support..
' Wrote:i think its a pretty good idea there....Artifacts shouldnt be a problem....Templars dont exist as well...and besides, the artifacts and the Templars came from the Hiigara-an world not the freelancer world(Sirius) so it doesnt matter whether it exists on freelancer or not....800 years ago is a long time...anything may have happend...artifacts may have lifespan(perishable) over a few hundred years...the last one that let out the Hiigara before perishing might have been a unique one...
its just a story...whatever exist or not on freelancer dont really matter..
Its a good RP story...i give u credit for the time and effort for writing such a long one...well done..
You have my support..
thank you very much Durandal, its nice to hear some positive feed back ^.^, plz keep em comin guys,
be it negative feedback or positive, lemme kno