The New KNF-Spec.Ops. Clan "The Alchemist"
The STORY
in the darkest day of the New Tokyo , scientist man named Van Hohenheim( From New Berlin , But He was working for Kusari ) was see someting different about powers... in nomads...
after he was saw it , he will begin researching...
he will find himself in the Kansas named system and he saw a new nomad ship heading to Alien Gate.he is intercept and fallow nomad ship and he'll head for the abondoned Nomad Station named Shrine.He was dock and he'll see so many spices are here , a life is here! he will continue his researches and gain Alchemy ability in here
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after he was return to his research facility in tokyo , he will teach his student to alchemy
right now they're protecting/helping Kusari Empire !
But He wants the Philosopher's stone ( the Nomad Artifact )...
if he Found the Nomad Artifact , Then He can live forever !
but there is someting is wrong , making a philisopher stone is so different , need a Artifact and ... a human life.
he will make a deal with Kusari superiors and use Bretonia to make a the Philisopher's stone
Right now they're broke away from legal activities because of this ...
I like the story, it is very refreshing. You mentioned being KNF-Spec.Ops, does that mean you will use KNF ships while searching for this Philosophers Stone? And how will your alchemical abilities work to affect the various space ships around you? I have not seen Fullmetal Alchemist, but it sure sounds interesting.
It is rather interesting, though the references to FMA are quite heavy. Anyhow, I'd suggest you work on spelling/grammar and the overall exterior of your post...Also, try to improve your ingame RP. I encountered one of you already and after teasing you a bit in my pirate char, you attacked without saying a word.
Additionally, try to lenghten the story of a whole faction.