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| − | But im confused - there is a logic error in the outline of the story; it initially says that 10 pilots were created to "counteract" (ie fight) a Coalition threat | + | But im confused - there is a logic error in the outline of the story; it initially says that 10 pilots were created to "counteract" (ie fight) a Coalition threat named the "Fallen Angels" - Later, it seems that these 10 pilots and their descendants ''are'' the Fallen Angels? |
That needs to be reworded somehow.. doesn't make sense at the moment. | That needs to be reworded somehow.. doesn't make sense at the moment. | ||
Laowai | Laowai | ||
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Edited some spelling and Grammar:
But im confused - there is a logic error in the outline of the story; it initially says that 10 pilots were created to "counteract" (ie fight) a Coalition threat named the "Fallen Angels" - Later, it seems that these 10 pilots and their descendants are the Fallen Angels?
That needs to be reworded somehow.. doesn't make sense at the moment.
Laowai
