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Feedback for my stories - Derkylos - 11-12-2008
' Wrote:Pretty damn good as it goes:)
Incidently ...
The Awakening
One of us is gonna have to change, and I sure do love this dress.
Quote:NB: The titles kinda suck, but that's 'coz im not very good at titles...suggestions welcome.
They're more placeholders than anything...and that is a pretty cliched title...
Feedback for my stories - Derkylos - 12-01-2008
Added another one...sorry about the messed up inverted commas, but I can't be bothered to go 'round and replace them all right now. maybe later.
(damn Microsoft Word...)
Feedback for my stories - Zapp - 12-01-2008
On the new 'Defection' one... break up the wall of text with line spaces in between paragraphs before I'll read it, OK? Otherwise, I get a headache and lose concentration.
Feedback for my stories - Malaclypse 666 - 12-01-2008
"Defection"
Wall of Text! Aaargh!
Put some paragraphs in that sucker, and call me. Then I'll read it, mkay...?
Feedback for my stories - Derkylos - 12-01-2008
Sorry, it looked Ok in MS word...added some spaces in, now, hope it's easier to read...
On a related note...what programmes do people use to write stories in before they upload them? MSword obviously isn't working at all.
Feedback for my stories - Zapp - 12-01-2008
I usually write them into the post, or use Google Docs.
Feedback for my stories - DeathsOverture - 03-03-2009
Good job on "The Crew of the Gremyln," there's a lot of inspiring character development there. I'm really sorry about your parents, though :(
EDIT:
Quote:Derkylos originates from Liberty. Son of Universal employees, he often flew alongside his parents on trade runs. One fateful day, the family's Rhino was rear-ended by a DSE train while leaving a trade lane. His parents were killed instantly as the ship broke up.
Feedback for my stories - jammi - 03-03-2009
' Wrote:Sorry, it looked Ok in MS word...added some spaces in, now, hope it's easier to read...I wrote all of Destiny in M$ Word. With the crappy newer versions you have to remember to put two spaces between paragraphs when copy/pasting stuff over. The lines might look like they've spaced themselves, but they haven't. Double spacing is your friend.
On a related note...what programmes do people use to write stories in before they upload them? MSword obviously isn't working at all.
And just to be different: http://www.weebls-stuff.com/toons/Owls/
Feedback for my stories - Tarkis - 03-03-2009
Just read them all, and they were all good and easy to fully read.
Except for the last, which was a bit hard to read all the way through.
That's just because it's not a story, but a short bit on every member of a crew. So it's not "bad".
I don't have any suggestions on making them better,
they're good enough as is, imo.