Well I am pretty new here compared with some of you guys here, so I would like some feed back on Rommies Tales and her bio... Just to see if Im doing things that are a half decent read.
I've been reading a couple of these for a while. I like the development of the character specific to server events, but I believe you can develop a bit more upon your character. Right now, it is only a recounting of what hapenned, without much emotion, as in a mission report. How about adding a bit more depth, seeing what the character think - including, outside server events for instance.
Yea I know what you mean, this is my first proper attempt at role play so, Im just finding my feet, I will be building on it more as the character develops, I have also made a new story in the watering holes... Rochester Inn.
Ive made an addition, its turning away from a log type story, there will still be stuff that happens on the server but I want to develop Rommie a bit more.
EDIT: Is the title catchy enough? Im welcome to suggestions.
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