The Danzigs Storyline

[Cyberanson]

Alright folks, I want to address those of you, who are interested in my story.

The [RM-RNC]Danzig

If you encounter logical errors or just plain crap, let me know. I would be glad to have some opinions on it.

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[Barrier]

A very nice beginning to a story. I really liked the idea with the pictures, they add a lot of clarity to the story.

:)Pros: Very good overall. Nice description of places. (like the hangar or the lounge)

:(Cons: The green fonts are a bit hard to read. (maybe you should use this <strike>Test</strike> Test, and also this <strike>Test</strike> Test) Describe some of the responsibilities that August has after promotion.

Great Job!

[Cyberanson]

Hey thanks for the hint! I just copied the text from our RM forums, therefore it's harder to read here. I will adjust it over the time.

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[Barrier]

Gah, Vanessa's text burns the eyes a bit. Change it to something lighter plox. ;)

[Cyberanson]

Problem is: I use the IPB 2.1 Default template when browsing the forums. Looks all good to me?

Do you have a suggestion for the color, which looks good in every template?

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EDIT: Good job on the story so far, can't wait for the next part.:)
Also well written by Maj. Sovok.