Feedback Wanted

[Connor]

Thank you guys for the feedback. It's been better then I expected! I will most likely be making a few edits and I still need to record a lot more scenes and most likely rerecord a few.

@Protégé and @Coin I've had a little look into the copy right issue and this fair usage thing. As long as I don't over use it, give credits to the author and name the track then it should be fine. Also, @Coin I never realised the dust effects were there and now I've seen them it's really annoying. I'll look into rerecording the first bit with the stations so that I can remove the dust particle bit. I also need to redo Graves Station anyway as it's slightly bugged out.

@Snake I thought about having gun sounds in this video however I decided against it because I thought it'd sound odd. However, in future battle scene videos it might be a good idea if I put some in. I'll toy around with the idea and see what I get.

@Pepe That's actually not a bad idea about the buying and selling part. I still have a lot of room at the end to add parts into it. Maybe something along the lines of mining in Dublin, moving though Bretonia down to Rheinland and then selling it on the Planet might make it a little more clear? Maybe I could mix this in with your security idea where the transports get jumped halfway through the journey? I'll toy around with a few ideas and see what I can get.

I really appreciate your feedback guys, thank you! I'll try and get a new and updated version out soon (Within the month).

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[Corile]

@Protégé and @Coin I've had a little look into the copy right issue and this fair usage thing. As long as I don't over use it, give credits to the author and name the track then it should be fine. Also, @Coin I never realised the dust effects were there and now I've seen them it's really annoying. I'll look into rerecording the first bit with the stations so that I can remove the dust particle bit. I also need to redo Graves Station anyway as it's slightly bugged out.

You're looking in the wrong place.
https://www.youtube.com/yt/copyright/

@edit: As far as my experience with Spinnin' and UMG is concerned - they will most likely block the video in Germany, block it from playing on mobile devices and put their own ads on it.

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Reflections on the Revolution in Gallia
Custodi // High City of Heraklion // The Cult of Archangels
Log Filter // Post Creator // Manhattan

[Gulryz]

It's really good , I like It

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You can ignore reality but you can not ignore consequences of ignoring reality

[Epo]

This one has stolen my heart :3
Nice pictures, I'm looking forward to see more.
Nice intro as well