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Colonel Z.e.r.o. · (This post was last modified: 08-12-2009, 02:06 AM by Colonel Z.e.r.o..)

I'm trying not to stop writing for this one like I did with Bianca, Fuschia Lance is the name. I'm trying to keep it straightforward but interesting at the same time. These first paragraphs are just a short narrative intro as to the character's former and current life came to be. Any suggestions? writing tips? Etc.

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=44483

Nathan's Log || The "Real Story" of Lenox Casper

Colonel Z.e.r.o. · 08-14-2009, 04:01 AM,

no feedback of any sort?

Nathan's Log || The "Real Story" of Lenox Casper

darthbeck · 08-14-2009, 04:12 AM,

its good. nothing negitive to say about it.

' Wrote:<span style="font-family:Century Gothic">Violence is Golden</span>

Colonel Z.e.r.o. · (This post was last modified: 08-21-2009, 11:34 PM by Colonel Z.e.r.o..)

I'll try to add journal entries and movies even in time, just that work has been both hard and frustrating.

Nathan's Log || The "Real Story" of Lenox Casper

Colonel Z.e.r.o. · 09-01-2009, 05:49 AM,

I started another one as well. this one more of a journal entry from the Captain's point of view.

What do you think?

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=46007

Nathan's Log || The "Real Story" of Lenox Casper

Colonel Z.e.r.o. · 09-08-2009, 05:16 AM,

Well?

Nathan's Log || The "Real Story" of Lenox Casper

Colonel Z.e.r.o. · 10-07-2009, 01:40 AM,

Still waiting...

Nathan's Log || The "Real Story" of Lenox Casper

**Barrier** · 10-08-2009, 05:18 AM,

Well. These are some really nice stories. Only one major suggestion: check your spelling. There are a lot of misspelled words and missing letters.
Otherwise, you ideas are great. I have to add that I would wish to read more about the Freelancer.

Colonel Z.e.r.o. · 10-10-2009, 01:06 AM,

' Wrote:Well. These are some really nice stories. Only one major suggestion: check your spelling. There are a lot of misspelled words and missing letters.
Otherwise, you ideas are great. I have to add that I would wish to read more about the Freelancer.

Thanks, I'm glad to say I will try to further her story when things are back to "normal".

Nathan's Log || The "Real Story" of Lenox Casper

Colonel Z.e.r.o. · 12-27-2009, 05:09 AM,

' Wrote:Well. These are some really nice stories. Only one major suggestion: check your spelling. There are a lot of misspelled words and missing letters.
Otherwise, you ideas are great. I have to add that I would wish to read more about the Freelancer.

I added more about her backstory, if I feel up to it, I'll post both the movie and a brief summary about it tomorrow.

Nathan's Log || The "Real Story" of Lenox Casper

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