Salazar Kithe feedback forum!

[Seth Karlo]

Please, I want to hear good points and bad, areas I can improve and areas I'm doing well in.

The characters:

Salazar.Kithe (Sabre)
SaIazar.Kithe (Tridente)
Immortal.Hunter (Dreadnought)

Story: http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=38022

Story for Siona (His daughter): http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=44015

Tales:
The Murder of the Survivors of the Darwin
The attack on Leeds
Rebirth of the Hunter and the destruction of the Stonehenge
The Destruction of the Immortal Hunter.

Thanks!

-Seth

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[Tomtomrawr]

I read the story of Salazar Kithe a while ago, and thought it was brilliant. It actually inspired me to start writing the Personality Dysfunction. When I get to the point where he has a ship, I need to meet you in space so I canz pwnz youz.

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[17:45:39] Wolfs Ghost (Murphy): Tom, you have problems. Go kill yourself.
[19:25:12] Johnny (Jam): Tomtom, I will beat you with a spoon.
[14:22:56] Prarabdh Thakur: KILL HIM WITH A SHEEP.
[17:40:48] Eagle (Junes): Tom should be slapped with a spoon.
[11:32:18] Warspite: Thank you for being so awesome Tom. <3
[18:17:36] Metano: I love you tomtom
[20:06:24] Warspite: I will seriously give you epic head.

Edit: also, Tomtomrawr, fappin' like a boss.

[Seth Karlo]

Pwnz me eh?

*Chuckles*

Anyway, I like how few people read or respond to anything in this forum. People never read the stories...

Oh well.

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[Tomtomrawr]

Pwnz me eh?

*Chuckles*

Anyway, I like how few people read or respond to anything in this forum. People never read the stories...

Oh well.

I wrote that post over a month ago, so now instead of "Pwnz youz" it is "Joinz youz".

And I'm glad your back to writing the story, you can count on me to be a regular reader.

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[17:45:39] Wolfs Ghost (Murphy): Tom, you have problems. Go kill yourself.
[19:25:12] Johnny (Jam): Tomtom, I will beat you with a spoon.
[14:22:56] Prarabdh Thakur: KILL HIM WITH A SHEEP.
[17:40:48] Eagle (Junes): Tom should be slapped with a spoon.
[11:32:18] Warspite: Thank you for being so awesome Tom. <3
[18:17:36] Metano: I love you tomtom
[20:06:24] Warspite: I will seriously give you epic head.

Edit: also, Tomtomrawr, fappin' like a boss.

[Donutman]

Seth, the Buccaneers pwnzored your face. :P


Also, something I never got, how the heck is Salazar still living? He's like 1200 years old!

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This thread is so stupid that a bird sitting on a nearby tree just EXPLODED.

[Tomtomrawr]

Seth, the Buccaneers pwnzored your face. :P
Also, something I never got, how the heck is Salazar still living? He's like 1200 years old!

1600 years old actually. But he doesn't look a day over 1500:P.

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[17:45:39] Wolfs Ghost (Murphy): Tom, you have problems. Go kill yourself.
[19:25:12] Johnny (Jam): Tomtom, I will beat you with a spoon.
[14:22:56] Prarabdh Thakur: KILL HIM WITH A SHEEP.
[17:40:48] Eagle (Junes): Tom should be slapped with a spoon.
[11:32:18] Warspite: Thank you for being so awesome Tom. <3
[18:17:36] Metano: I love you tomtom
[20:06:24] Warspite: I will seriously give you epic head.

Edit: also, Tomtomrawr, fappin' like a boss.

[AJBeast]

*waves*

HAI!

I read your story a while back. Tis cool. Haven't seen you ingame though. Except that one time I was running away from a BAF on my Buccaneer and you were just sitting there... but you didn't say anything...

[stardust47]

It has win.

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[Seth Karlo]

Seth, the Buccaneers pwnzored your face. :P
Also, something I never got, how the heck is Salazar still living? He's like 1200 years old!

Read the story, all is explained there:)

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[Seth Karlo]

Latest post is veeeery graphic rape/torture scene... Is it too graphic? Should I edit it?

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