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Offline Akura
03-26-2010, 07:50 PM,
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So you read Project Transcendence, here is the place to leave feedback!

I originally wasn't going to have a feedback thread, but after getting this:

Maj. Voelkel Wrote:Project Transcendence is a masterpiece. Keep it up.

[18:41:05] Pilgrim: Hey Akura
[18:41:23] Pilgrim: that's one of the best stories I've ever read
[18:41:46] Dave (Akura): Which one?
[18:42:03] Pilgrim: Project Transcendence
[18:42:08] Dave (Akura): Oh, thanks

I thought maybe I'd leave a place for you to leave your thoughts on the story, critisism, suggestions and general thoughts on Georgia Brown as a character.

Tell me what I'm doing right, what needs improving and what you think I should do.


Thanks!
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Offline Boss
03-26-2010, 07:58 PM,
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Georgia's spot-on about the Second Fleet...

Ouroboros is quite the fan of her work, you know.

Zealot Wrote:Just go play the game and have fun dammit.
Treewyrm Wrote:all in all the conclusion is that disco doesn't need antagonist factions, it doesn't need phantoms, it doesn't need nomads, it doesn't need coalition and it doesn't need many other things, no AIs, the game is hijacked by morons to confuse the game with their dickwaving generic competition games mixed up with troll-of-the-day.
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Offline Akura
03-26-2010, 08:12 PM,
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' Wrote:Georgia's spot-on about the Second Fleet...

Ouroboros is quite the fan of her work, you know.


Put it this way:


Order Indie Lolwuts killed in Self defence as a member of the Order: Eight
Nomads killed as a member of the Order: Zero
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Offline Hell Hunter
03-26-2010, 08:48 PM,
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I love it every single of it. and nice editing with the pictures
I like et ;)

[Image: discosig_zps7bb5682f.png]
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Guest
03-27-2010, 12:28 PM,
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Loving it so far.

One of the few stories that I've been able to read all the way through.

I demand you write more.
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Offline Akura
03-27-2010, 03:20 PM,
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Thanks! That's the motivation I need ^_^

Thanks to Treewrym and Sara for helping contibute too.
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Offline Ryummel
03-30-2010, 12:29 PM,
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I really like your way of writting the stories (well this feedback is only for P.Transcendence, but I'll include The Siren too). Please, never give up!

[Image: 9rXD1gi.png]
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Offline Geromix
03-31-2010, 12:17 PM,
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I love your stories. Its the only one that I have read completely.

The most amazing thing that sets this story apart is how well the various screen shots and pictures are spaced throughout the story. They appear at the right time and and at the right place and all of them fit so well into the story. Very well edited and very neatly presented.

Keep it up! And i am looking for more!

[Image: UT12.png]
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Offline Rodent
03-31-2010, 12:22 PM,
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The writing itself I would say, is not brilliant, but it's pretty good, but Akura's Screenshot and Photoshop abuse is what sets it apart.

Good work, all in all.
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Offline etiainen
04-10-2010, 02:12 PM,
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I've just finished reading it and I must say I find it really interesting and amazing:)Hats off

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