RHEINLAND STATE ALCHEMIST - RSA ( old KSA )

[Vrabcek]

Well...maybe you should start RPing in game a bit, then thinking about to make the faction official.
And with such things you wont be much welcomed in Rheinland:

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[[Cerberus] Illusive Man]

THE STORY


in the darkest days of New Berlin, a scientist named Van Hohenheim saw the radical change, in nomads. After that he personally saw them in the Edge Nebula, he began researching, using the lab that the Chancellor entrusted to him. His research lead him to Kansas, a system on the outskirts of Liberty. He successfully managed to intercept and follow a strange nomad ship that lead Van Hoheheim to an ancient gate, deep within the gloomy nebula of Kansas. When he approached the odd-looking jumpgate, he inadvertently activated it, thus jumping to an unknown system. The radiation within the newly discovered system was high and deadly, but after a while he managed to catch a glimpse of a station deep within the asteroid field of the system. The station was made of rock, pure asteroid rock, with some strange organic pillars. Van Hohenheim discovered the legend about the 'philosopher's stone' there. When he returned to his laboratory on New Berlin, he aknowledged several lab-apprentices about what he found in that abbandoned station. They are currently working under direct supervision of the leading Rheinland Military research department. Van Hohenheim sought to aquire any kind of nomad artifact that he could get his hands on, the Chancellor helped him greatly with the high budget that they've assigned him. After some extended research, and various theories, Van Hohenheim belives that by aquiring a rare, yet unknown nomad artifact, he will acheive immortality. But there is an issue, to acheive immortaliy with this artifact, labelled as a 'philosopher's stone' by Van Hohenheim, he will need to sacrifice a human life. Right now, they're activities are deemed illegal by the major House governments and corporations, but they seek to make a deal with the Chancellor. He performs strange, cruel experiments on unlucky souls, who are foolish enough to trust him..
Van Hohenheim is Researching Nomads and The Wilds now...
His Sons , Commander Edward Elric and Liutenant Alphonse Elric will Stop him ...Because if he Continue to Making the Philosopher's Stone , the many innocent people will die...

(Instructions of The Philosopher's Stone : The Nomad Artifact + Nomad Brain + Many People's Soul)

And since you've used 'part' of what I've said, give me at least some credits, bud. :cool:

[The.Skywalker]

:D

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Nothing is True,Everything is Permitted

[Enoch]

Well, you managed to make sure all aspects of your RP are in place, and you answered all the questions asked here. Very nice indeed. Good RP, and good to see the search for the philosophers stone continues. I am eagerly awaiting to see what happens next!

This, I approve of all factions that could potentially be related to Harry Potter.

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[Loken]

By the way you might wanna crop your signature a bit. It's over the size limit.

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[The.Skywalker]

okay , updated.

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Nothing is True,Everything is Permitted

[Zukeenee]

Where are you based from? The Fullmetal Alchemist - Alchemy

That's not what that question means...

And my response to this? Same as my response in your previous topic.

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[Daedric]

You should read this:

http://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=8996

and this:

http://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=1746

You don't simply buy a faction. You create it along with other players.

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[Akura]

This story gave me an aneurysm for starters...


Problems as follows:

It's an anime story that doesn't make any sense in Discovery Lore at all.
There is already a Rheinland Military faction and you can't be the second.
The Nomad Lore doesn't work at all like you described it (see first problem).
The Nomads and Wild aren't going to be neutral to a Military group that actively cuts them open and researches them. Dream on.


Other than that, you seem to have determination, so don't give up straight away.

[Dennis Jameson]

It's an anime story that doesn't make any sense in Discovery Lore at all.

So... what you're saying is that they need more 13 year old girls who are captains of capital ships in order to make the anime more suitable for disco? :P

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