AI Storyline

[Vicho Deivis]

The lore need other kind of chages. For example:

1) If the dimensional gates are necesary to travel to another dimension How the AIs reach this dimension? The onlys Dimensions with gates are already eated so or you change it for the lore or you found a solution to access dimensions without a gate. Then why the dimensional Snorlax can't come here and eat us all?

2) Change the part of the "swarm of the side of a galaxy." Is not credible and if you want to include it there are some question than need to be answer like. How do you get the resources? Galaxies are so big because they are basicaly empty so there are two options: a) The olds AI controled many galaxies, so they know how to travel galactic distances with little problem an this needs to be part of the lore one way or another. b) The laws of physics was diferent in your dimension. In that case How the hell the AI techology works here?

3) Why the alfa code doesn't afect organics? Humans, Nomads or any ET. They are magic or something? Because if the solution is make computers with organic components we are all saved.

4) If the Alfa code is transmited from another dimension to this one. Why after the initial infection needs to be spread by normal hacking means? Why isn't everywere?

5) Why all need to happen on Sirius? A small portion of a small Galaxy in a ridiculously huge? The consensus ship landed here, fine. But why the Sov'regin are important and not a random infested AI in Andromeda? Or Magallanes, an even smaller Galaxy than ours without even shape? Or a lonely star lost in the void betwen the Galaxies? Why the gate can not be build somewhere else without you even know it? The first time I ask you say than I've to wait but the Sov'regin are not good enought to solve this question. Not ofense guys.

All this can be resolve. My recomendation is to forget the stuff of other dimensions and say than you come from another Galaxy. Maybe look for something than really exist for a change*.


* Sirius in reality is only a blue Star a few light years away from us. No cluster, no nebulas no nothing. Just a close neighbor.

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