Feedback Wanted

[Connor]

Hey. So, I have been doing some media work recently for Freelancer, I quite enjoy it and I've been liking the support I've had for me to carry on. I've been in the process of making a new video for a while and I'd like some feedback on it.

This video is for the Crown Services. This is basically BMM and Bowex. It's meant to show off who we are and what we do as the two factions, kinda like a trailer. This has been in the works for a long time now, yet only just over a half of it is done. I've still got fight scenes to add and maybe a few more calmer scenes to add in but I'd like some feedback on what I have so far. I'm looking for constructive feedback please!

There's a fairly large gap about 3/4 way through this, more fight scenes are intended to go there.

This has been uploaded in 720p for the moment, the final version will be in 1080p and will be rendered with my dads high spec computer. Two songs I use are:

Avicii - Waiting For Love (Intro)
Alan Walker - Force

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