You've taken the feedback I've given to you in skype and worked on it very well. Your structure is far better and the use of longer sentences is helping you a lot there. I don't really have much to add, keep it up. The only thing I will say is that you should clean your logs out of any group chat so that we only see InRP stuff as it can make the logs a little bit hard to follow.
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