Morph logs: Ely'on

[Operator]

Not bad. Not bad at all.

Here's some hints.
1st. Try to use more constructed sentences, not just like 3-4 words in it.
2nd. Nomads can't hide their emotions, so use them in () like in every single sentence.
3rd. Try to use more "word/synonym" combinations, but not more than one in every sentence.
4ty. Try to use more mysterious words, like "Voids" instead of "Systems".

Here's a few examples.

*...'Yours' ~invade- 'Ours' system...* -> ***...'Yours' ~intrude~ 'Ours' |Void| (discord)...***
*...'Ours' ~plays~ with 'Yours' mind...('giggles')...* -> ***...'Ours' (joy) ~misting/dispeling~ 'Yours' consciousness...***
*...'Yours' ~die~ here...* -> ***...'Yours' shall be -purified/exterminated- "immediately" (anger)...***

Keep it up, I'm sure you have a great potential!