Morph Logs: Immertum

[Nosferath]

Sorry for taking so long to reply. There are some minor details that should be corrected in this log. If you post more logs, I'll have more to work with.
In the meanwhile:
-There's no need to correct a mistake like using "your" instead of "yours". There's no right way in nomad speech. Also, inside |K'Hara, using OOC messages is frowned upon.
-Unless you're surrounded by many people, try not to address them by their character name. Instead of "[CR|-Bravo.One]", you could have said "Son of Crayter".
-This is a very personal comment, so take it with a pinch of salt: I don't like the word "Void". It's becoming overused, just like Dark-things long time ago.

There's not much else that can be said for now. Again, post more logs so I know what we're dealing with, and I can give you proper guidelines.

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